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On Becoming Old

There's so much richness in our hearts, when we realize that everything we held for granted, is about to vanish before our eyes in a matter of limited time. Gradually we come closer with family members who we couldn't call for decades; We slowly begin building bridges with people we had wronged; In silence, we enjoy every scent of rain, flowers, and trees; Our skins become more excited when the ocean breeze blows; We find more value in smiling at a stranger, for a smile is one of the most valuable gifts we can give; We see the world with new eyes....

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Date: 7/24/2017 10:23:00 AM
Yes, our thoughts and emotions move backward as we age, and long forgotten memories begin to surface. Thanks for sharing.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/28/2017 3:37:00 AM
Welcome, Cona. Thank you for reading and commenting on my work! *^_^*
Date: 7/22/2017 6:49:00 AM
Wise words indeed - I read your poem and tears sprang to my eyes Teddy. I've just visited mum and she is not at her best at the moment and the last 2 1/2 yrs since my father's death have brought us so much closer together-) hugs jan xx
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/22/2017 12:05:00 PM
So sorry about that, Jan. I pray that everything will work out fine for her. Thank you for reading and commenting on my work. *^_^*
Date: 7/22/2017 6:09:00 AM
Yes, to give a smile and to love Teddy. I enjoyed this poem :) Hope you are well. :)
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/22/2017 12:01:00 PM
Hi Heidi. Yes, I'm good! *_^ A smile is priceless. Thank you for reading and enjoying my piece! *^_^*

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