On Becoming Old

There's so much richness in our hearts,
when we realize that everything we held
for granted, is about to vanish before our
eyes in a matter of limited time.
Gradually we come closer with family members
who we couldn't call for decades;
We slowly begin building bridges with people
we had wronged;
In silence, we enjoy every scent of rain, flowers,
and trees;
Our skins become more excited when the ocean breeze
blows;
We find more value in smiling at a stranger, 
for a smile is one of the most valuable gifts we can give;
We see the world with new eyes....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Adams Avatar
July 24, 2017 at 10:23 AM
Yes, our thoughts and emotions move backward as we age, and long forgotten memories begin to surface. Thanks for sharing.
Kimathi Avatar
July 28, 2017 at 3:37 AM
Welcome, Cona. Thank you for reading and commenting on my work! *^_^*
Allison Avatar
July 22, 2017 at 6:49 AM
Wise words indeed - I read your poem and tears sprang to my eyes Teddy. I've just visited mum and she is not at her best at the moment and the last 2 1/2 yrs since my father's death have brought us so much closer together-) hugs jan xx
Kimathi Avatar
July 22, 2017 at 12:05 PM
So sorry about that, Jan. I pray that everything will work out fine for her. Thank you for reading and commenting on my work. *^_^*
Sands Avatar
July 22, 2017 at 6:09 AM
Yes, to give a smile and to love Teddy. I enjoyed this poem :) Hope you are well. :)
Kimathi Avatar
July 22, 2017 at 12:01 PM
Hi Heidi. Yes, I'm good! *_^ A smile is priceless. Thank you for reading and enjoying my piece! *^_^*
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