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On Becoming Enlightened

As Christmas draws near I contemplate my faith.
Jesus spent many years away, yet no one knows
For sure why, or where, or how, but destiny's lure.
When he happened upon meeting the teachers
Who would guide his steps with the knowledge
Needed in guiding ours, he was anointed with
Sacred oils and the perfect time for his return
To teach the yearning masses was revealed.
He taught in parables to be better understood
So that even the youngest children could grasp
The lesson, and so his words would be spread
By many as he knew his earth time was short.
Even the least of non-believers lives by these
Teachings, though they may never realize it.

Simple truths, compassion for others, kindness
To animals, love’s consideration for humanity,
Helping the helpless in reaching out to strangers.
These have been manifested inside our DNA
To help the broken souls who need help most.
Faith instills courage, yields strength, and endows
Peace that helps to conquer the greatest of fears.
It is among one of the most blessed gifts taught,
Along with forgiveness, to be honored and revered.
As this winter season has been chosen to honor
His blessed birth, I also deign to honor his teachers.
If you visualize their light in others of all races, creeds,
And faiths, you are on the true path of enlightenment.

"Blessed birth and destined death are both divine."


Jesus Contest 
Sponsor Anthony Slausen
HM 
7-5-2016


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Sponsor Broken Wings
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Merryman Avatar
July 4, 2016 at 2:24 PM
Jesus taught us to love God And others. If we would all follow these rules, the world would be a better place. Congrats, Connie!
Rebstock Avatar
July 3, 2016 at 3:51 PM
Well said, congratulations
Watt Avatar
July 2, 2016 at 4:16 PM
Thank you Connie for the poetic reminder of the simple truths of following Christ's teachings: kindness, love, peace, forgiveness. These have a ripple effect throughout society and history. Blessings ~ John
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 3, 2016 at 9:20 PM
I appreciate that John. Thanks a lot. ; )
A   Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 10:21 PM
Connie, Congratulations on your winning poem. XOX - LINDA -
Kimathi Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 2:40 AM
Thanks Connie, for inspiring me this morning. Congrats on your top placement in the contest!! ;-)
A  Avatar
January 18, 2016 at 8:47 AM
Connie, Congrats on your any poem win. ** SKAT **
Haight Avatar
January 17, 2016 at 7:03 PM
A very beautiful and inspirational poem of your faith and love in our Jesus Christ and his followers, Connie. Congratulations on your First Place win! Hugs, Sandra
Callus Avatar
January 17, 2016 at 12:32 PM
You make an excellent teacher, Connie! Very illuminating. Believing in an after life makes life on earth worth living. ~ Congratulations on this high flying win! Warm regards // paul
Inman Avatar
January 17, 2016 at 8:11 AM
A very encouraging and inspiring write, Connie.
Allison Avatar
January 16, 2016 at 5:03 PM
a beautiful and enlightening message Connie congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Gentry Avatar
January 16, 2016 at 3:54 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win with this very inspirational poem. I cannot fathom how anyone lives without faith... Much wisdom in your words.
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 11, 2016 at 2:45 AM
Thank you so much Susan. I believe I may have been having problems seeing when this poem won, so I got way behind in comments. Cheers, Connie
Schneiter Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 10:10 PM
Connie, few poems are as rich in wisdom as this one. I found myself agreeing w/ every line. Your words should be engraved in granite. Perfectly wonderful!
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 3:59 AM
This is such a lovely encouraging comment Paul. I appreciate it when someone takes the time to be so nice and thoughtful. Blessings to you for a beautiful 2016! Thank you so much. Aloha, Connie
Peterson Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 6:56 PM
It is good to see the message reverberating through the ages on wings from distant lands and touching the one writing here (yourself), as if the words were uttered only yesterday.
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 4:01 AM
How very sweet of you Peter. I am humbled by such a lovely expression. Thank you my friend. Blessings for a wonderful 2016!
Laurie Avatar
December 22, 2015 at 7:22 PM
Hello Connie... I enjoyed reading your poem with all your messages for us readers to enlighten us on how to be tolerant - thank you Connie - Lindsay
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 4:04 AM
It works wonders...like instant karma. Thank YOU my friend for your sweet comment. Blessings, Connie
A  Avatar
December 20, 2015 at 6:53 PM
CONNIE, stopped by to enjoy some of my favorite and best poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 4:08 AM
Thank you very much SKAT. I appreciate your comments and I am sorry I don't always answer as quickly as I would like. I have problems with my eyes and so my time is limited on the computer per doctor's orders. I wish you a beautiful 2016 my friend! Blessings, Connie
Godwin Avatar
December 19, 2015 at 10:56 AM
An enlightened poem by an enlightened poet. My Fiance and I both enjoyed the content which could refresh one's spirit on any given day. So glad I read this ... CayCay
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 20, 2015 at 4:47 AM
How kind of you both CayCay. Thank you so much. Mele Kalikimaka! Aloha, Connie
Dietrich Avatar
December 14, 2015 at 7:12 PM
Connie, you are an enlightened being if ever there was one!! Keep sharing your beautiful thoughts forevermore!!
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 15, 2015 at 11:23 AM
You are such a dear friend Andrea. Thank you for this lovely comment! Mele Kalikimaka! Love, Connie
Boddie Avatar
December 13, 2015 at 9:09 PM
what does it mean to Love....I mean the way it's meant from Above....we have to accept others for who they are....regardless what they believe by far....because we choose to Live as we please....we will suffer the consequence of not bending our knees....I Love this connie....;)
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 15, 2015 at 11:24 AM
Thank you very much for your lovely thoughtful comment Eric. Cheers, Connie
Sathasivam Avatar
December 13, 2015 at 12:38 AM
Excellent. A beautiful and enlightening write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 15, 2015 at 11:25 AM
Thank you very much Ravi. Cheers, Connie
Lindley Avatar
December 11, 2015 at 5:11 PM
Wonderful message my friend, so finely crafted. A7 Adding this gem to my fav list and thanks....
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 15, 2015 at 11:27 AM
It makes me happy you liked it that much Robert. Thank you so much for the fave! Hugs, Connie
Yvonne Avatar
December 11, 2015 at 7:11 AM
Amen and Bravo! We are of like minds here Connie! I love these words of course I will fav this piece as I fav you always. God Bless as always Armand
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 15, 2015 at 11:29 AM
I have great respect for your talent and feel the same about you my friend. Thank you so very much for faving this poem. Blessings, Connie
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
December 9, 2015 at 6:56 AM
Connie, your glorious weave strings of wisdom and reminders!!! Very well written and striking! Happy day! ~Olive Eloisa =`)
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 15, 2015 at 11:30 AM
Thank you so much for your nice comment Olive. Blessings, Connie
Vaso Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 8:56 PM
Adored this, wonderful!!!
Dietrich Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 4:22 PM
so glad to see you posted this glorious one. Tis the season , dear friend!!!
Onclaud Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 1:58 PM
this is the very heart of this holyday, connie... you are truly a light!... a work for all seasons!... huggs
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