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on awakening

pitter patter on the roof, rain falling softly foghorn drones sometimes from afar in the harbour warns ships danger lurks--heed!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/10/2010 11:45:00 PM
also nice. I may see all your poems at one time tonight!!
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Date: 6/20/2010 8:44:00 AM
A wondereful Tanks on awakening with nice images. Enjoyed it
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Date: 6/20/2010 6:47:00 AM
Interesting write that got my attention by the way that you presented the idea of rain and fog ...Just a hint of it in the write..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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