On Awakening

pitter patter on
the roof, rain falling softly
foghorn drones sometimes
from afar in the harbour
warns ships danger lurks--heed!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
August 10, 2010 at 11:45 PM
also nice. I may see all your poems at one time tonight!!
Mehta Avatar
June 20, 2010 at 8:44 AM
A wondereful Tanks on awakening with nice images. Enjoyed it
Kendrick Avatar
June 20, 2010 at 6:47 AM
Interesting write that got my attention by the way that you presented the idea of rain and fog ...Just a hint of it in the write..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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