Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Poet Verse

On An Ordinary Day

competition entry: 

It fits in the palm of my hand
Holding it with a firm grip
I don’t need it to stand
I just need it to dip

I use it every day
I wield it up and down
Like a toy I like to play
Sometime I smile sometimes I frown

Day to day this item I use
I work hard and it gives me a hot flush
Never being one to abuse
I never mistreat my toilet brush.
GG 24/11/2013

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Tim Ryerson December 7, 2013 at 4:04 AM You are one of a kind my friend...Like my house and car, I clean my toilet once a year whether it needs it or not...

Richard Lamoureux December 3, 2013 at 7:04 PM Ha ha, I thought it was going to be a yo yo. Congrats on your win.

Andrea Dietrich December 3, 2013 at 6:05 PM I love this one, but every day? You use it every day??? BIG congrats, Mandy. I have not seen you in a while and it is a treat to see this one.

Shadow Hamilton December 3, 2013 at 4:05 PM hi Mandy congrats on win Shadow x smile hug

Nette Onclaud December 3, 2013 at 2:28 PM big congrats on your winning spot, mandy.. hugggs

Joseph May December 3, 2013 at 1:11 PM congrats on a fine win Mandy

Harry Horsman November 25, 2013 at 5:34 AM I was having an ordinary day Mandy, till i read this gem,, back to your intriguing endings i see, just love these....and this

Ilene Bauer November 24, 2013 at 7:22 PM ha! thanks for the chuckle, mandy...

Joseph May November 24, 2013 at 7:28 AM nicely penned Mandy....I enjoyed the read....