On an October Night

Lost in thoughts,
While him with a curious, lonely gaze,
Captivating each other, drawn by the gravity of a waist and a thread of firmness.
Dancing over the moon with the unknown fears of our hearts.
From lovers to distant souls, to lovers again.
Tangled like a thousand-year roots of a banyan tree.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Agustin Avatar
October 14, 2025 at 1:38 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
nawaz Avatar
October 14, 2025 at 1:41 AM
Thank you
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