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 Written  for my son's birthday. 

On An October Caramel Morning

"recently scenes of early life have stolen into my mind, like breezes blown ..." Quote by _Samuel Taylor Coleridge A sweet October caramel morning. Your strong will entrance was a blessing gift. The fresh leaves danced with pleasure, adorning. A sweet October caramel morning Chimed laughter, as wind chilled winter-warning. Precious memories details of you, shift. A sweet October caramel morning, Your strong will entrance was a blessing gift. 10/3/2022 Writing Challenge - Past Memories - ''T'' Forms Poetry Contest. Theme - past memories Sponsored by: Constance La France
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La France Avatar
November 12, 2022 at 1:14 AM
Eve, a lovely Triolet and congratulations on your placement in my contest, Writing Challenge - Past Memories- "T" Forms, and of course I like the quote, well done !
Poet Avatar
November 1, 2022 at 7:35 AM
Back with congratulation on your contest win, Eve. I'm sure it's amply deserved with your great poem.
Kendrick Avatar
October 5, 2022 at 6:56 AM
Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. I enjoyed reading this one today. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page a few days back. Sara
Gentile Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 4:40 AM
Eve, your wonderful title drew me in and your seasonal Triolet is splendid! Happy Tuesday xxoo
Messina Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 3:25 AM
Beautifully written, Eve. (Love this) Happy birthday to your son! Hugs my friend
Rodrigues Avatar
October 3, 2022 at 7:12 PM
Beautiful poem for your son’s birthday! Love the refrain!
Wolf Avatar
October 3, 2022 at 6:14 PM
Something special about 'a sweet October caramel morning,' just as your son is someone special! Lovely! :) gw
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October 3, 2022 at 10:04 AM
A lovely Triolet Eve, “A sweet October caramel morning” is a beautiful line and the gift of your son was a blessing indeed… Belle
Hankins Avatar
October 3, 2022 at 8:41 AM
Oh, Eve, I really like this triolet, especially the "sweet October caramel morning" phrase. So nice!
Poet Avatar
October 3, 2022 at 7:53 AM
Treasured recollections might be felt in my friend Eve. Certainly, October and caramel are a delicious combination!
Kyser Avatar
October 3, 2022 at 3:27 AM
A lovely write - October and caramel do indeed go together! Have a blessed day!
Buhagiar Avatar
October 3, 2022 at 1:44 AM
I try to evade sweets even though I love caramel. Lovely triolet. Hugs.
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