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On An October Caramel Morning

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Written for my son's birthday.

"recently scenes of early life have stolen into my mind, like breezes blown ..." Quote by _Samuel Taylor Coleridge A sweet October caramel morning. Your strong will entrance was a blessing gift. The fresh leaves danced with pleasure, adorning. A sweet October caramel morning Chimed laughter, as wind chilled winter-warning. Precious memories details of you, shift. A sweet October caramel morning, Your strong will entrance was a blessing gift. 10/3/2022 Writing Challenge - Past Memories - ''T'' Forms Poetry Contest. Theme - past memories Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Constance La France

Date: 11/12/2022 1:14:00 AM

Eve, a lovely Triolet and congratulations on your placement in my contest, Writing Challenge - Past Memories- "T" Forms, and of course I like the quote, well done !

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/1/2022 7:35:00 AM

Back with congratulation on your contest win, Eve. I'm sure it's amply deserved with your great poem.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/5/2022 6:56:00 AM

Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. I enjoyed reading this one today. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page a few days back. Sara

Mike Gentile

Date: 10/4/2022 4:40:00 AM

Eve, your wonderful title drew me in and your seasonal Triolet is splendid! Happy Tuesday xxoo

Charles Messina

Date: 10/4/2022 3:25:00 AM

Beautifully written, Eve. (Love this) Happy birthday to your son! Hugs my friend

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/3/2022 7:12:00 PM

Beautiful poem for your son’s birthday! Love the refrain!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/3/2022 6:14:00 PM

Something special about 'a sweet October caramel morning,' just as your son is someone special! Lovely! :) gw

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 10/3/2022 10:04:00 AM

A lovely Triolet Eve, “A sweet October caramel morning” is a beautiful line and the gift of your son was a blessing indeed… Belle

L Milton Hankins

Date: 10/3/2022 8:41:00 AM

Oh, Eve, I really like this triolet, especially the "sweet October caramel morning" phrase. So nice!

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/3/2022 7:53:00 AM

Treasured recollections might be felt in my friend Eve. Certainly, October and caramel are a delicious combination!

Jeff Kyser

Date: 10/3/2022 3:27:00 AM

A lovely write - October and caramel do indeed go together! Have a blessed day!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/3/2022 1:44:00 AM

I try to evade sweets even though I love caramel. Lovely triolet. Hugs.