Bl Devnath Poet Haiku

On An Excursion

on an excursion
                                     students are seen glorious
                                      their auras speak dreams

                                        few have no complain
                                    at the time of taking seats
                                            few do politics

                                     whistling train moves on
                                       talking many to other
                                         few reserve silence

                                         in all their coaches
                                  few are busy with own games
                                       few sing and few clap

                                        faces are tired now
                                      as stamina is finished
                                        journey is complete

Written on 8th Januay2015

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Andrea Dietrich January 8, 2015 at 2:19 PM You conveyed the weariness of these students, BL. I enjoyed the read! Bl Devnath January 8, 2015 at 8:57 PM From just before starting the journey to just before its end on the way enjoyment continues but as the journey is completed we feel tired generally. The difference between before having and after having.. I think so. Train journey is best suited.Thanks my lovely friend for your lovely comment. Loved always,bl