On an Evening Ride

During my bicycle ride
through the countryside one evening,
I saw along the hamlet lane
in the quiet backcountry, 
girls in plain dresses walking  together,
brass pots shinning at their sides
to fetch water.

They moved towards the nearby pond, 
with laughter, free of rank and pride.
Their joy simple and unrestrained –
a sight I loved to see
as I pedaled slowly by.

My mind paused a moment among them
unfastening the chains of inequality,
social evils and worries in life,
as I pedaled slowly down the dusty path
watching their simple joy.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Dietrich Avatar
September 17, 2026 at 7:54 PM
This is so nice just being with such thoughts as these in the moment. Spell shining with one n 😄
Andresen Avatar
September 8, 2026 at 10:37 AM
- A lovely evening ride on your bike, thanks for letting me join you, Akham :) - hugs
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