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On a Winternoon

In a colorful shade of brightness on a winternoon; with the shadows hardly bothering, at all; the air's got a bite as day ready's for night, causing mercury levels to fall. ~ There's a chilliness inside the brightness on a winternoon; continuing to persist to convince; on a journey Sol goes causing shadows to grow, one can watch Sol retreat, if one squints! ~ The colors all fade from the brightness on a winternoon; the day trades all it's clouds for night's bright stars; with family member, or friend when the day finally ends we'll animate our winowed restaurants, and bars. ~ So we slide through the squint in the brightness on a winternoon; and vividly night's canopy gets raised; time, moseys on quietly yielding the next dawn, then, we'll all start all over, unfazed.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/22/2012 10:09:00 AM
Way to go! Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week David. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/29/2012 8:03:00 AM
A very good poem in rhyme David - like it. - Have a lovely Sunday. - oxox Anne-Lise :)
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David Goodwin
Date: 8/7/2012 5:08:00 AM
You are soo generous with your remarks. Thanx, for the encouragement ! doc.

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