Line Gauthier Poet Free verse

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On a Whim

women are capricious
one moment for a song
they give their heart
buying into the illusion

once the delusion shattered
it's all gone with the wind
and no turning back
the fickle hands of time



AP: Honorable Mention 2021

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Gershon Wolf July 16, 2021 at 3:40 PM 'Women are capricious' and 'real men' are fictitious... Line Gauthier July 17, 2021 at 12:16 PM now there's a poem ~

Sotto Poet July 16, 2021 at 11:23 AM Very true Line, and straight to the point, mysterious swings of time, and women always under a delusion. Thanks for sharing this poem. Blessings and kindest regards Line Gauthier July 17, 2021 at 12:16 PM Thank you so much, Lasaad ~