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women are capricious one moment for a song they give their heart buying into the illusion once the delusion shattered it's all gone with the wind and no turning back the fickle hands of time AP: Honorable Mention 2021 Posted on July 16, 2021

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/16/2021 3:40:00 PM

'Women are capricious' and 'real men' are fictitious...

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/17/2021 12:16:00 PM

now there's a poem ~

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/16/2021 11:23:00 AM

Very true Line, and straight to the point, mysterious swings of time, and women always under a delusion. Thanks for sharing this poem. Blessings and kindest regards

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/17/2021 12:16:00 PM

Thank you so much, Lasaad ~