Len Gasun Poet Tanka

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on a wedding day

On a Wedding Day

Walking down the aisle
While sweet music softly plays
Feels like on the clouds
With my pure white wedding gown 
And my hands with fresh bouquet

We take solemn vow
On sunny or stormy days
Whatever  happens
Together without a fear
We embrace our future aims

In a new sunrise
We lovingly look forward
Sprinkled with blessings
We’ll bind together with love
Love- forever from above



October 8,2012



3rd Place Winner
Contest: Tanka-Love and Marriage
Judged: 10/20/2012
Poet Sponsor: SandyIvy Davis

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Lucilla Carrillo June 29, 2013 at 7:18 PM This is a great poem for the contest. Thanks for sharing..... Lucilla

Sandy Ivy D November 30, 2012 at 7:15 PM Leonora, reading this one again. A very nice October Win. I am now adding you to my favorite poet list. cheers. SandyI

Sara Kendrick October 23, 2012 at 5:39 PM Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown October 23, 2012 at 7:05 AM Congratulations on your winning poem in SandyIvy's "Tanka-Love & Marriage" contest Leonora. Love, Carol

Skat A October 20, 2012 at 9:50 PM Leonora, congrats luv*Siddy

Joseph May October 20, 2012 at 8:17 PM well penned Leonora...congrats on your win

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 20, 2012 at 7:58 PM SUPER CONGRATS LEONORA ON A TREMENDOUS WIN FOR THIS AMAZING LUV AND MARRIAGE ENTRY..

Olusegun Arowolo October 20, 2012 at 5:08 PM Beautiful and lovely write,Leonora...Very smooth and enticing piece..Congratulations on your super win...

Sandy Ivy D October 20, 2012 at 3:53 PM leonora, enjoy your win' Sandy

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 12, 2012 at 9:46 AM MESMERIZING LINES OF PRECIOUS SENTIMENTAL EMOTION LEONORA ..AWESOME FLOW OF WEDDING DAY BEAUTY .. MY BIRTHDAY IS MAY 21ST .. AND I JUST ENTERED YOUR CONTEST LUV .. MY HUBBY HAD A MOMENT TO TYPE FOR ME ..HAVE A SWEET WEEKEND LUV ..

Elizabeth Wesley October 11, 2012 at 5:00 PM Like a trip into eternity I think; and holds many surprises along the way. You give the experience such hope and special meaning. Love, Elizabeth

Debbie Guzzi October 11, 2012 at 6:04 AM These tanka are more personal and about love as most tankas were in the past! good ones.. Light & Love

Justin Bordner October 10, 2012 at 11:27 PM I admire the fearless approach in your wedding dream Leonora - fear of the future should not intrude on fresh love - I also like how you give respect to Providence - J.A.B. %

Andrea Dietrich October 10, 2012 at 3:42 PM Just stopping here again to say HOWDY.

Lucilla Carrillo October 10, 2012 at 10:04 AM Congratulations on your win. This is a beautiful poem for a wedding day. many blessings. Lucy

Jack Horne October 10, 2012 at 9:40 AM lovely write, Leonora. Congrats on your wins, my friend : )

Chidozie Uche O. October 10, 2012 at 1:16 AM Nice write up about that beautiful day in human's life...... Wonderful piece, short and precise.

Andrea Dietrich October 9, 2012 at 11:03 PM this is very sweet, Leonora. For a busy girl, you are keeping up very well here!! Wish I had more time but I have to get off here right now. See ya later, alligator!

Poet Destroyer A October 9, 2012 at 8:42 AM Good morning my awesome friend, Leonora, Your wedding images, are a brides dream come true... i love the feeling of the sunrise.... I wishing you the best of luck in the contest.. enjoyed reading your tankas this morning... always~ :-) PD Len Gasun October 9, 2012 at 8:54 AM Thank you so much my dear friend PD and the rest for the inspiring comments.

Wilma Neels October 9, 2012 at 8:28 AM Leonora, you captured the beauty of that special day, I especially loved the ending :) hope you have a great day :) *hugs* Wilma

Bukang Liwayway October 9, 2012 at 7:35 AM very nice poem friend Leonora..when are you going to get married? please invite me okay? hahahahha..have a good day always!!

Anne-Lise Andresen October 9, 2012 at 7:31 AM A real princess wedding, romantic and lovely - only eyes for each other - nothing else matters - Leonora hope I will be invited when the big day comes. :) - Beautifully poem, as always. - Have a nice Tuesday afternoon. - - Oxox love Anne-Lise :)