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On a Wedding Day

Walking down the aisle
While sweet music softly plays
Feels like on the clouds
With my pure white wedding gown 
And my hands with fresh bouquet

We take solemn vow
On sunny or stormy days
Whatever  happens
Together without a fear
We embrace our future aims

In a new sunrise
We lovingly look forward
Sprinkled with blessings
We’ll bind together with love
Love- forever from above



October 8,2012



3rd Place Winner
Contest: Tanka-Love and Marriage
Judged: 10/20/2012
Poet Sponsor: SandyIvy Davis

Copyright © Len Gasun | Year Posted 2012

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Lucilla Carrillo Date: 6/29/2013 7:18:00 PM This is a great poem for the contest. Thanks for sharing..... Lucilla Login to Reply

Sandy Ivy D Date: 11/30/2012 7:15:00 PM Leonora, reading this one again. A very nice October Win. I am now adding you to my favorite poet list. cheers. SandyI Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 10/23/2012 5:39:00 PM Congrats on your winning work..Sara Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 10/23/2012 7:05:00 AM Congratulations on your winning poem in SandyIvy's "Tanka-Love & Marriage" contest Leonora. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 10/20/2012 9:50:00 PM Leonora, congrats luv*Siddy Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 10/20/2012 8:17:00 PM well penned Leonora...congrats on your win Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 10/20/2012 7:58:00 PM SUPER CONGRATS LEONORA ON A TREMENDOUS WIN FOR THIS AMAZING LUV AND MARRIAGE ENTRY.. Login to Reply

Olusegun Arowolo Date: 10/20/2012 5:08:00 PM Beautiful and lovely write,Leonora...Very smooth and enticing piece..Congratulations on your super win... Login to Reply

Sandy Ivy D Date: 10/20/2012 3:53:00 PM leonora, enjoy your win' Sandy Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 10/12/2012 9:46:00 AM MESMERIZING LINES OF PRECIOUS SENTIMENTAL EMOTION LEONORA ..AWESOME FLOW OF WEDDING DAY BEAUTY .. MY BIRTHDAY IS MAY 21ST .. AND I JUST ENTERED YOUR CONTEST LUV .. MY HUBBY HAD A MOMENT TO TYPE FOR ME ..HAVE A SWEET WEEKEND LUV .. Login to Reply

Elizabeth Wesley Date: 10/11/2012 5:00:00 PM Like a trip into eternity I think; and holds many surprises along the way. You give the experience such hope and special meaning. Love, Elizabeth Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 10/11/2012 6:04:00 AM These tanka are more personal and about love as most tankas were in the past! good ones.. Light & Love Login to Reply

Justin Bordner Date: 10/10/2012 11:27:00 PM I admire the fearless approach in your wedding dream Leonora - fear of the future should not intrude on fresh love - I also like how you give respect to Providence - J.A.B. % Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/10/2012 3:42:00 PM Just stopping here again to say HOWDY. Login to Reply

Lucilla Carrillo Date: 10/10/2012 10:04:00 AM Congratulations on your win. This is a beautiful poem for a wedding day. many blessings. Lucy Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 10/10/2012 9:40:00 AM lovely write, Leonora. Congrats on your wins, my friend : ) Login to Reply

Chidozie Uche O. Date: 10/10/2012 1:16:00 AM Nice write up about that beautiful day in human's life...... Wonderful piece, short and precise. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/9/2012 11:03:00 PM this is very sweet, Leonora. For a busy girl, you are keeping up very well here!! Wish I had more time but I have to get off here right now. See ya later, alligator! Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 10/9/2012 8:42:00 AM Good morning my awesome friend, Leonora, Your wedding images, are a brides dream come true... i love the feeling of the sunrise.... I wishing you the best of luck in the contest.. enjoyed reading your tankas this morning... always~ :-) PD Login to Reply Len Gasun Date: 10/9/2012 8:54:00 AM Thank you so much my dear friend PD and the rest for the inspiring comments.

Wilma Neels Date: 10/9/2012 8:28:00 AM Leonora, you captured the beauty of that special day, I especially loved the ending :) hope you have a great day :) *hugs* Wilma Login to Reply

Bukang Liwayway Date: 10/9/2012 7:35:00 AM very nice poem friend Leonora..when are you going to get married? please invite me okay? hahahahha..have a good day always!! Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/9/2012 7:31:00 AM A real princess wedding, romantic and lovely - only eyes for each other - nothing else matters - Leonora hope I will be invited when the big day comes. :) - Beautifully poem, as always. - Have a nice Tuesday afternoon. - - Oxox love Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply