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on a warm september afternoon

winding down
relaxing with a glass of pinot
enjoying the subtle joys of life
going with the flow
swaying to the rhythm
of mellow music
soaking in the sun
and late summer vibes

and then it's leonard cohen on low
from speakers in a far corner
feeling oozy feeling fine
like an unexpected soft caress
enhanced by the effects of wine
sensations warm and mellow
embarking on a journey of delight

transported
yes indeed transported



AP: 1st place 2026, Honorable Mention 2026, Honorable Mention 2024
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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