On a Summer Breeze

on a summer breeze
sweet scent of blooming flowers ~
hummingbirds feeding

sultry and humid
heat carried on zephyr winds ~
parched earth needs quenching

summerhaiku

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Jan Allison

July 15, 2023 at 1:03 AM

Gosh i dont know how I missed this gem Lin, Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

July 14, 2023 at 11:15 AM

Very well done, Lin. A happy Congrats to you

Kim Rodrigues

July 14, 2023 at 6:22 AM

Pretty! Congratulations, Lin!

Kim Merryman

July 12, 2023 at 6:06 PM

You captured summer well in your haiku, Lin! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M

Lin Lane

July 13, 2023 at 5:03 AM

Thank you very much, Kim.

Paula Goldsmith

July 12, 2023 at 11:14 AM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your "summer breeze" again. Have a blessed day writing away...................

Lin Lane

July 13, 2023 at 5:03 AM

Love your return visits, Paula. Thanks.

Sam Kauffman

July 12, 2023 at 10:54 AM

Congratulations on your win Lin as you show both faces, both sides, of the personality of a summer breeze! Wonderfully written my friend. Blessings of cool breezes to you!

Lin Lane

July 13, 2023 at 5:02 AM

Thank you ever so much for your fine comments, Sam.