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On a Summer Breeze

on a summer breeze
sweet scent of blooming flowers ~
hummingbirds feeding

sultry and humid
heat carried on zephyr winds ~
parched earth needs quenching

Copyright © Lin Lane | Year Posted 2023

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Jan Allison Date: 7/15/2023 1:03:00 AM Gosh i dont know how I missed this gem Lin, Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/14/2023 11:15:00 AM Very well done, Lin. A happy Congrats to you Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 7/14/2023 6:22:00 AM Pretty! Congratulations, Lin! Login to Reply

Kim Merryman Date: 7/12/2023 6:06:00 PM You captured summer well in your haiku, Lin! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 7/13/2023 5:03:00 AM Thank you very much, Kim.

Paula Goldsmith Date: 7/12/2023 11:14:00 AM Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your "summer breeze"  again. Have a blessed day writing away................... Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 7/13/2023 5:03:00 AM Love your return visits, Paula. Thanks.

Sam Kauffman Date: 7/12/2023 10:54:00 AM Congratulations on your win Lin as you show both faces, both sides, of the personality of a summer breeze! Wonderfully written my friend. Blessings of cool breezes to you! Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 7/13/2023 5:02:00 AM Thank you ever so much for your fine comments, Sam.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/12/2023 9:30:00 AM - A lovely summer breeze haiku, Lin :) - Congratulations :) - hugs Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 7/13/2023 5:02:00 AM Hugs and thanks to you, Anne-Lise ;-)

Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 7/12/2023 5:34:00 AM Excellent Haikus, Lin! Second one takes a turn! Congratulations on your top win! Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 7/13/2023 5:01:00 AM Thanks so much, Mala.

Tania Kitchin Date: 7/12/2023 5:11:00 AM Lin, congratulations on your first place win, I could smell the flowers, gorgeous imagery! Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 7/12/2023 5:22:00 AM Good morning, Tania and thanks for appreciating the imagery.

Jay Narain Date: 6/29/2023 10:05:00 AM Nice haiku, almost a song. Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 6/29/2023 10:54:00 AM Hi Jay and thanks. Yes, it is. When I searched for a photo to go with it, I kept finding pictures of Seals & Croft's Album. lol

Paula Goldsmith Date: 6/29/2023 9:10:00 AM A lovely write/sign. Summer is here for a couple of months. Have a great day............ Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 6/29/2023 10:53:00 AM Thank you ever so much, Paula. You have a great day as well.

Regina Mcintosh Date: 6/29/2023 5:29:00 AM Wonderful write - just beautiful. God bless you with grace and protection. Love, Gina Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 6/29/2023 7:12:00 AM G'morning and thanks very much, Gina.