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On a Summer Breeze

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A Summer Haiku x 2 Nature Themed Contest

Sponsored by Tania Kitchin

June 29, 2023

 

on a summer breeze sweet scent of blooming flowers ~ hummingbirds feeding sultry and humid heat carried on zephyr winds ~ parched earth needs quenching

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Jan Allison
Date: 7/15/2023 1:03:00 AM
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Gosh i dont know how I missed this gem Lin, Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/14/2023 11:15:00 AM
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Very well done, Lin. A happy Congrats to you
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/14/2023 6:22:00 AM
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Pretty! Congratulations, Lin!
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Kim Merryman
Date: 7/12/2023 6:06:00 PM
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You captured summer well in your haiku, Lin! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M
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Lin Lane
Date: 7/13/2023 5:03:00 AM
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Thank you very much, Kim.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/12/2023 11:14:00 AM
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Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your "summer breeze"  again. Have a blessed day writing away...................
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Lin Lane
Date: 7/13/2023 5:03:00 AM
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Love your return visits, Paula. Thanks.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/12/2023 10:54:00 AM
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Congratulations on your win Lin as you show both faces, both sides, of the personality of a summer breeze! Wonderfully written my friend. Blessings of cool breezes to you!
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Lin Lane
Date: 7/13/2023 5:02:00 AM
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Thank you ever so much for your fine comments, Sam.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/12/2023 9:30:00 AM
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- A lovely summer breeze haiku, Lin :) - Congratulations :) - hugs
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Lin Lane
Date: 7/13/2023 5:02:00 AM
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Hugs and thanks to you, Anne-Lise ;-)
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/12/2023 5:34:00 AM
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Excellent Haikus, Lin! Second one takes a turn! Congratulations on your top win!
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Lin Lane
Date: 7/13/2023 5:01:00 AM
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Thanks so much, Mala.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/12/2023 5:11:00 AM
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Lin, congratulations on your first place win, I could smell the flowers, gorgeous imagery!
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Lin Lane
Date: 7/12/2023 5:22:00 AM
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Good morning, Tania and thanks for appreciating the imagery.
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Jay Narain
Date: 6/29/2023 10:05:00 AM
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Nice haiku, almost a song.
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Lin Lane
Date: 6/29/2023 10:54:00 AM
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Hi Jay and thanks. Yes, it is. When I searched for a photo to go with it, I kept finding pictures of Seals & Croft's Album. lol
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/29/2023 9:10:00 AM
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A lovely write/sign. Summer is here for a couple of months. Have a great day............
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Lin Lane
Date: 6/29/2023 10:53:00 AM
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Thank you ever so much, Paula. You have a great day as well.
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Regina Mcintosh
Date: 6/29/2023 5:29:00 AM
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Wonderful write - just beautiful. God bless you with grace and protection. Love, Gina
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Lin Lane
Date: 6/29/2023 7:12:00 AM
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G'morning and thanks very much, Gina.

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