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Written on February 7, 2025

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On A Spring Flight

In hasty beats, rhythms so sweet Wrens soar and chase, crooning softly Such gentle pleasures, with a ready tweet Robins climb through the skies, rising Over the mountains, their wings greet Flying high, laughing proudly across the peaks
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February 8, 2025 at 8:55 AM
Dear sweet gina; this is absolutely gorgeous and so well written, i love the way you always paint imagery and this is no exception! The picture too goes so well with the poem and i especially love the lines " Robins climb through the skies, rising Over the mountains, their wings greet Flying high, laughing proudly across the peaks" just stunning! Breathtaking! Pleasure reading you always! Sending you light always
Singh Avatar
February 8, 2025 at 6:23 AM
These herald the coming of spring..Very nice.Besides, the picture beautiful.
Alex Avatar
February 8, 2025 at 4:50 AM
A grand bird scene is beautifully depicted.
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