On A Spring Flight

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Written on February 7, 2025

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In hasty beats, rhythms so sweet Wrens soar and chase, crooning softly Such gentle pleasures, with a ready tweet Robins climb through the skies, rising Over the mountains, their wings greet Flying high, laughing proudly across the peaks

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Ink Empress

Date: 2/8/2025 8:55:00 AM

Dear sweet gina; this is absolutely gorgeous and so well written, i love the way you always paint imagery and this is no exception! The picture too goes so well with the poem and i especially love the lines " Robins climb through the skies, rising Over the mountains, their wings greet Flying high, laughing proudly across the peaks" just stunning! Breathtaking! Pleasure reading you always! Sending you light always

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh

Date: 2/8/2025 6:23:00 AM

These herald the coming of spring..Very nice.Besides, the picture beautiful.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 2/8/2025 4:50:00 AM

A grand bird scene is beautifully depicted.