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On a Passing Cloud There Floats a Dream

On a passing cloud, there floats a dream 
A darkened cloud, from the sun-lights beam 
To wet my garden... my planted seeds 
That I just planted, holding rosary beads
 To grow a tree, that blossoms love 
That reaches that cloud, that floats above 
And carries with it... as it drifts free 
Thoughts and prayers, to you, from me
 As it passes you, it's colored white 
To dry your eyes, make your day bright
My tree of love... my flowers gleam 
On that passing cloud, that floats my dream 


(Dedicated to Eve Roper who has just lost her beloved husband) 
My prayers and thoughts to Eve and her family 
May he rest in peace

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Eve Roper Date: 10/1/2020 10:47:00 PM Came back tonight to read this beautiful verse, Charles. Thank you again.. Hugs Eve Login to Reply

Robert Lindley Date: 9/6/2018 9:33:00 AM Such a wondrous and caring gift my friend. Your dedication is truly a great gift and I too pray that Eve receives solace and sorrow's healing from divine hands my friend. A wondrous and loving creation gifted to a beautiful. kindhearted, very talented and wonderful poetess.. Login to Reply

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton Date: 9/5/2018 2:30:00 PM A beautiful, kind and caring gift of Love to Eve and her family at their time of great loss. Condolences to Eve and family. Login to Reply Charles Messina Date: 9/6/2018 8:01:00 AM Thank you, Leanne. Always there to try to cheer someone up after a great loss.

Anisha Dutta Date: 9/4/2018 11:39:00 PM My tribute also with your prayer. I am great admirer of Eve n love her dearly. Login to Reply Charles Messina Date: 9/6/2018 8:02:00 AM Thank you Anisha. Thanks for joining in my prayers.

Lindsay Laurie Date: 9/3/2018 8:51:00 PM G'day Charles … at times through unbearable sadness the finest words are found to comfort and keep forever - gee I liked this dedication Charles - Lindsay Login to Reply Charles Messina Date: 9/4/2018 6:00:00 AM G'day Lindsay, thank you and you are absolutely right my friend. Charlie

Carole Duet Date: 9/3/2018 2:00:00 PM Oh what a lovely poem and sweet dedication. I am so glad you wrote this and let us all know. Thanks, Charlie. Login to Reply Charles Messina Date: 9/4/2018 6:01:00 AM Thank you, Carole...YVW

Arturo Michael Date: 9/3/2018 12:29:00 PM Bless you my friend...A kind thing to do...A lovely poem...All the best to Eve too Login to Reply Charles Messina Date: 9/4/2018 6:01:00 AM Thank you, Arturo...Blessings

Eve Roper Date: 9/3/2018 12:03:00 PM This is so very beautiful, Charles, I will cherish this forever. I will be put it in my own personal file that I am saving for him... Thank you so very much... Hugs dear friend Login to Reply Charles Messina Date: 9/4/2018 6:04:00 AM Thank you, Eve. So sorry again for your loss of your husband. Stay strong my dear friend...love and hugs...Charlie

Lawrence Sharp Date: 9/3/2018 10:39:00 AM A very caring and well worded tribute, nicely expressed, Charles. I will also join you in wishing peace be with Eve. Login to Reply Charles Messina Date: 9/4/2018 6:04:00 AM Thank you, Lawrence...much appreciated!

Winged Warrior Date: 9/3/2018 10:00:00 AM My deepest condolences to our dear friend Eve, for the loss of her hubby...thanks for bringing this sad news to our attention Charles, with this great tribute...god bless Eve...love & light...^WW^ Login to Reply Charles Messina Date: 9/4/2018 6:07:00 AM Thank you, WW...YVW Yes, blessings to Eve.

Chris Green Date: 9/3/2018 9:37:00 AM What a beautiful and heart felt poem for a friend who is dealing with a great loss. I had no idea, my heart breaks for her. Thank you for writing this Charles. Login to Reply Charles Messina Date: 9/4/2018 6:10:00 AM Thank you, Chris. Such nice words you have expressed. Our hearts weep together my friend. YVW Eve Roper Date: 9/3/2018 2:17:00 PM Thank you, Chris, you have always been a great support.. I am so blessed by you and everyone on this site..

Brandy Nicole Date: 9/3/2018 8:52:00 AM Your thoughts curl gently around me. Such a beautiful dedication to Eve. I am keeping this family in my thoughts and prayers at this time. So sorry to hear about the loss of her husband. You have such a kind and caring heart Charlie. ~ Brandy Login to Reply Charles Messina Date: 9/4/2018 6:13:00 AM Thank you, Brandy. I am sure Eve appreciates your thoughts as well. Blessings...Charlie Eve Roper Date: 9/3/2018 12:10:00 PM I'm so grateful Charles has my husband and me in his prayers and this poem will be with me forever. Thank you, Brandy.