Charles Messina Poet Rhyme

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This is not for the contest. Just a little dedication to a friend who has just lost her husband. My condolences to her and her family. Blessings being sent.

I hope Joseph, you don't mind that I used your opening line, it was a perfect fit. But sorry, this is not one to be judged. Thank you.

On a Passing Cloud There Floats a Dream

On a passing cloud, there floats a dream 
A darkened cloud, from the sun-lights beam 
To wet my garden... my planted seeds 
That I just planted, holding rosary beads
 To grow a tree, that blossoms love 
That reaches that cloud, that floats above 
And carries with it... as it drifts free 
Thoughts and prayers, to you, from me
 As it passes you, it's colored white 
To dry your eyes, make your day bright
My tree of love... my flowers gleam 
On that passing cloud, that floats my dream 


(Dedicated to Eve Roper who has just lost her beloved husband) 
My prayers and thoughts to Eve and her family 
May he rest in peace

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Eve Roper October 1, 2020 at 10:47 PM Came back tonight to read this beautiful verse, Charles. Thank you again.. Hugs Eve

Robert Lindley September 6, 2018 at 9:33 AM Such a wondrous and caring gift my friend. Your dedication is truly a great gift and I too pray that Eve receives solace and sorrow's healing from divine hands my friend. A wondrous and loving creation gifted to a beautiful. kindhearted, very talented and wonderful poetess..

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton September 5, 2018 at 2:30 PM A beautiful, kind and caring gift of Love to Eve and her family at their time of great loss. Condolences to Eve and family. Charles Messina September 6, 2018 at 8:01 AM Thank you, Leanne. Always there to try to cheer someone up after a great loss.

Anisha Dutta September 4, 2018 at 11:39 PM My tribute also with your prayer. I am great admirer of Eve n love her dearly. Charles Messina September 6, 2018 at 8:02 AM Thank you Anisha. Thanks for joining in my prayers.

Lindsay Laurie September 3, 2018 at 8:51 PM G'day Charles … at times through unbearable sadness the finest words are found to comfort and keep forever - gee I liked this dedication Charles - Lindsay Charles Messina September 4, 2018 at 6:00 AM G'day Lindsay, thank you and you are absolutely right my friend. Charlie

Carole Duet September 3, 2018 at 2:00 PM Oh what a lovely poem and sweet dedication. I am so glad you wrote this and let us all know. Thanks, Charlie. Charles Messina September 4, 2018 at 6:01 AM Thank you, Carole...YVW

Arturo Michael September 3, 2018 at 12:29 PM Bless you my friend...A kind thing to do...A lovely poem...All the best to Eve too Charles Messina September 4, 2018 at 6:01 AM Thank you, Arturo...Blessings

Eve Roper September 3, 2018 at 12:03 PM This is so very beautiful, Charles, I will cherish this forever. I will be put it in my own personal file that I am saving for him... Thank you so very much... Hugs dear friend Charles Messina September 4, 2018 at 6:04 AM Thank you, Eve. So sorry again for your loss of your husband. Stay strong my dear friend...love and hugs...Charlie

Lawrence Sharp September 3, 2018 at 10:39 AM A very caring and well worded tribute, nicely expressed, Charles. I will also join you in wishing peace be with Eve. Charles Messina September 4, 2018 at 6:04 AM Thank you, Lawrence...much appreciated!

Winged Warrior September 3, 2018 at 10:00 AM My deepest condolences to our dear friend Eve, for the loss of her hubby...thanks for bringing this sad news to our attention Charles, with this great tribute...god bless Eve...love & light...^WW^ Charles Messina September 4, 2018 at 6:07 AM Thank you, WW...YVW Yes, blessings to Eve.

Chris Green September 3, 2018 at 9:37 AM What a beautiful and heart felt poem for a friend who is dealing with a great loss. I had no idea, my heart breaks for her. Thank you for writing this Charles. Charles Messina September 4, 2018 at 6:10 AM Thank you, Chris. Such nice words you have expressed. Our hearts weep together my friend. YVW Eve Roper September 3, 2018 at 2:17 PM Thank you, Chris, you have always been a great support.. I am so blessed by you and everyone on this site..

Brandy Nicole September 3, 2018 at 8:52 AM Your thoughts curl gently around me. Such a beautiful dedication to Eve. I am keeping this family in my thoughts and prayers at this time. So sorry to hear about the loss of her husband. You have such a kind and caring heart Charlie. ~ Brandy Charles Messina September 4, 2018 at 6:13 AM Thank you, Brandy. I am sure Eve appreciates your thoughts as well. Blessings...Charlie Eve Roper September 3, 2018 at 12:10 PM I'm so grateful Charles has my husband and me in his prayers and this poem will be with me forever. Thank you, Brandy.