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This is not for the contest. Just a little dedication to a friend who has just lost her husband. My condolences to her and her family. Blessings being sent.

I hope Joseph, you don't mind that I used your opening line, it was a perfect fit. But sorry, this is not one to be judged. Thank you.

On a passing cloud, there floats a dream A darkened cloud, from the sun-lights beam To wet my garden... my planted seeds That I just planted, holding rosary beads To grow a tree, that blossoms love That reaches that cloud, that floats above And carries with it... as it drifts free Thoughts and prayers, to you, from me As it passes you, it's colored white To dry your eyes, make your day bright My tree of love... my flowers gleam On that passing cloud, that floats my dream (Dedicated to Eve Roper who has just lost her beloved husband) My prayers and thoughts to Eve and her family May he rest in peace

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Date: 10/1/2020 10:47:00 PM
Came back tonight to read this beautiful verse, Charles. Thank you again.. Hugs Eve
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Date: 9/6/2018 9:33:00 AM
Such a wondrous and caring gift my friend. Your dedication is truly a great gift and I too pray that Eve receives solace and sorrow's healing from divine hands my friend. A wondrous and loving creation gifted to a beautiful. kindhearted, very talented and wonderful poetess..
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Date: 9/5/2018 2:30:00 PM
A beautiful, kind and caring gift of Love to Eve and her family at their time of great loss. Condolences to Eve and family.
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charles messina
Date: 9/6/2018 8:01:00 AM
Thank you, Leanne. Always there to try to cheer someone up after a great loss.
Date: 9/4/2018 11:39:00 PM
My tribute also with your prayer. I am great admirer of Eve n love her dearly.
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Date: 9/6/2018 8:02:00 AM
Thank you Anisha. Thanks for joining in my prayers.
Date: 9/3/2018 8:51:00 PM
G'day Charles … at times through unbearable sadness the finest words are found to comfort and keep forever - gee I liked this dedication Charles - Lindsay
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Date: 9/4/2018 6:00:00 AM
G'day Lindsay, thank you and you are absolutely right my friend. Charlie
Date: 9/3/2018 2:00:00 PM
Oh what a lovely poem and sweet dedication. I am so glad you wrote this and let us all know. Thanks, Charlie.
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charles messina
Date: 9/4/2018 6:01:00 AM
Thank you, Carole...YVW
Date: 9/3/2018 12:29:00 PM
Bless you my friend...A kind thing to do...A lovely poem...All the best to Eve too
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Date: 9/4/2018 6:01:00 AM
Thank you, Arturo...Blessings
Date: 9/3/2018 12:03:00 PM
This is so very beautiful, Charles, I will cherish this forever. I will be put it in my own personal file that I am saving for him... Thank you so very much... Hugs dear friend
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Date: 9/4/2018 6:04:00 AM
Thank you, Eve. So sorry again for your loss of your husband. Stay strong my dear friend...love and hugs...Charlie
Date: 9/3/2018 10:39:00 AM
A very caring and well worded tribute, nicely expressed, Charles. I will also join you in wishing peace be with Eve.
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Date: 9/4/2018 6:04:00 AM
Thank you, Lawrence...much appreciated!
Date: 9/3/2018 10:00:00 AM
My deepest condolences to our dear friend Eve, for the loss of her hubby...thanks for bringing this sad news to our attention Charles, with this great tribute...god bless Eve...love & light...^WW^
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charles messina
Date: 9/4/2018 6:07:00 AM
Thank you, WW...YVW Yes, blessings to Eve.
Date: 9/3/2018 9:37:00 AM
What a beautiful and heart felt poem for a friend who is dealing with a great loss. I had no idea, my heart breaks for her. Thank you for writing this Charles.
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charles messina
Date: 9/4/2018 6:10:00 AM
Thank you, Chris. Such nice words you have expressed. Our hearts weep together my friend. YVW
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/3/2018 2:17:00 PM
Thank you, Chris, you have always been a great support.. I am so blessed by you and everyone on this site..
Date: 9/3/2018 8:52:00 AM
Your thoughts curl gently around me. Such a beautiful dedication to Eve. I am keeping this family in my thoughts and prayers at this time. So sorry to hear about the loss of her husband. You have such a kind and caring heart Charlie. ~ Brandy
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charles messina
Date: 9/4/2018 6:13:00 AM
Thank you, Brandy. I am sure Eve appreciates your thoughts as well. Blessings...Charlie
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/3/2018 12:10:00 PM
I'm so grateful Charles has my husband and me in his prayers and this poem will be with me forever. Thank you, Brandy.