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When I say " waiting for my line to ring" it is not of sound in which I speak. My favorite past-time with the exception of poetry (of course) is trout fishing. When you fly fish, one watches the line in the water and when you see a ring at the end of the line that is in the water, it usually means that you either have a fish nibble or you are stuck on the bottom. Hopefully "Fish-On"

On a Misty Morning

It is here...where my mind is at ease 
Alone, fishing on a misty morning 
Wading, feeling only the rivers breeze 
Waiting, for my line to ring
 
God's painting pictured on the sky 
I see each time I cast my fly 
It is here...where I would choose to die
 
On a misty morning, with my mind at ease 


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Sam Kauffman

February 11, 2020 at 10:00 AM

Hi Charlie, Congratulations on your placement! Your poem reflects the simplicity and serenity of fishing. My husband loves to fish - 12 on the scale of 1-10.

Charles Messina

February 12, 2020 at 5:48 AM

Hi Sam, thank you for your visit. Your husband and I have a lot in common. One of my favorite pass times! Hugs

Rob Carmack

February 11, 2020 at 2:08 AM

Charlie, a coworker of mine has a similar plan, the only difference, he will be taking a half pound of the finest hydroponic with him. Congrats on your placement.

Charles Messina

February 11, 2020 at 4:22 AM

He and I should hook up..(lol) Thank you very much, Rob for your generous placement! Much appreciated. All the best my friend.

Jean Murray

May 14, 2019 at 4:37 PM

Sounds like a good choice for meeting your Maker Charlie. Such a peaceful piece of poetry. Well done.

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 12, 2019 at 1:43 PM

- Congratulations on your win, Charlie :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Arturo Michael

May 12, 2019 at 9:12 AM

Lovely...

Gershon Wolf

May 9, 2019 at 8:05 PM

Charlie, I've just read this again, and it's even better this time, if that's possible! You have penned a piece of Paradise! If this isn't a big winner, then my name isn't Murgatroyd Fofoofnik. (That's what my mother called me, bless her memory. LOL). Best of everything, Gershon

Charles Messina

May 9, 2019 at 8:23 PM

Well, Murgatroyd (lol) from your mothers lips to mine...as she has been blessed to have raised a great child, I have been blessed to have met a great friend and a great poet. Thank you for being you...Your friend, always. Charlie

Kurt Ravidas

May 8, 2019 at 10:15 AM

The river was close. Oh, how I loved weekend motor boat trips to the other side for fishing in the endless channels between the sandy islands overgrown with shrubs and willows. Thanks for the opportunity to remember, Charles.

Charles Messina

May 9, 2019 at 7:26 PM

Any time I can help bring back a great memory it makes my writing so much more rewarding...Thanks Kurt, you've brightened my evening! CM

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 8, 2019 at 8:23 AM

- A lovely feeling through this poem, I chose the same picture :) - Winner wishes for you, my friend Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Elizabeth Kinch

May 8, 2019 at 6:22 AM

I'm do not fish myself but you have portrayed such a tranquil morning I could be there with you.

Charles Messina

May 8, 2019 at 7:26 AM

Hello dear friend Elizabeth, the beauty of the nature and the relaxation of just being out-doors is overwhelming. If you were there with I, you would feel what I feel. Thanks for visiting. So much appreciated. Charlie :)

Kurt Ravidas

May 8, 2019 at 4:24 AM

Best childhood memories: early, very early mornings on the big river. Nicely done, Charles.

Charles Messina

May 8, 2019 at 7:30 AM

Yes, great childhood memories Kurt. Early mornings, picking worms from my parents lawn the night before, and the excitement of the long walk to the river knowing that you have a chance to hook onto something huge...unforgettable! Thanks for visiting my friend. Charlie

Gershon Wolf

May 7, 2019 at 10:13 PM

Yes! More words merely detract from your picture-perfect creation. Bravo! ~ gw

Charles Messina

May 8, 2019 at 7:32 AM

Thank you, Gershon. I really appreciate your kind words. ~CM

Susan Ashley

May 7, 2019 at 9:41 PM

I was captivated by the tranquil beauty of your poem, my dear Charlie, especially your last two lines that cast such a tender light on your intimate introspection. Simply stunning my charming friend. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Charles Messina

May 8, 2019 at 7:38 AM

Hello my dear friend, Susan. SO nice to see you back again. Reading your lovely comments makes it even more wonderful and rewarding to write. Your words are simply beautiful and kind. Thank you so much. Warmest wishes always ~Charlie

Nette Onclaud

May 7, 2019 at 5:07 PM

i can feel the magic of fishing through your radiant wor, charles.. thanks too for a wonderful contest...huggs

Charles Messina

May 8, 2019 at 7:39 AM

Thank you, Nette. You are most welcome! And thank you too for entering my contests. SO much appreciated :) Hugs // Charlie

Lawrence Sharp

May 7, 2019 at 2:14 PM

Great restraint and perfectly balanced brevity, but still with very good imagery. A peaceful and inviting poem, Charlie, very nicely done.

Charles Messina

May 8, 2019 at 7:43 AM

Hello my poetry brother, thank you for your always sincere and kind words. I really appreciate you, Lawrence. Have a great week moving forward...hope all is well in S.A. ~CM

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