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On a Mild November Day

dark room lightens sunshine brightens outside prime time strong brew sublime red birds singing wind chimes ringing gold leaves clinging now brain- storming rhymes are forming jotting phrases nature’s praises daylight’s waning eyes are straining no more stalling night is falling indoors I go poems in tow November 9, 2022 entered in Brian Strand's Premiere Choice Contest Placed 6th

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Date: 11/13/2022 6:32:00 PM
Love the form and the words chosen to get the reader ready for "poems in tow" Hope you are well and happy. Lonna
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/14/2022 12:31:00 PM
Lonna, THANKS so much. Janice
Date: 11/13/2022 3:00:00 PM
congrats for your win. i enjoyed the read.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/14/2022 12:31:00 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea. Janice
Date: 11/13/2022 11:48:00 AM
Congrats on your winner. Sara
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/14/2022 12:30:00 PM
Thanks so much, Sara. Janice
Date: 11/12/2022 10:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your deseved win, dear Janice!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/14/2022 12:30:00 PM
Thanks so much, Valsa. Janice
Date: 11/10/2022 4:30:00 AM
Beautiful footles, dear friend ! All the Best
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/10/2022 4:16:00 PM
Thanks so much, Valsa! Janice
Date: 11/9/2022 6:34:00 PM
Lots of meaning in the very short rhyming sentences. Blessings my friend
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/9/2022 7:53:00 PM
Thanks so much, Eve. Janice

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