Janice Canerdy Poet Footle

On a Mild November Day

dark room
lightens

sunshine
brightens

outside 
prime time

strong brew
sublime

red birds
singing

wind chimes
ringing

gold leaves
clinging

now brain-
storming

rhymes are
forming

jotting
phrases

nature’s 
praises

daylight’s
waning

eyes are
straining

no more
stalling

night is
falling

indoors 
I go

poems
in tow


November 9, 2022
entered in Brian Strand's Premiere Choice Contest              Placed 6th

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Lonna Blodgett November 13, 2022 at 6:32 PM Love the form and the words chosen to get the reader ready for "poems in tow" Hope you are well and happy. Lonna Janice Canerdy November 14, 2022 at 12:31 PM Lonna, THANKS so much. Janice

Andrea Dietrich November 13, 2022 at 3:00 PM congrats for your win. i enjoyed the read. Janice Canerdy November 14, 2022 at 12:31 PM Thanks so much, Andrea. Janice

Sara Kendrick November 13, 2022 at 11:48 AM Congrats on your winner. Sara Janice Canerdy November 14, 2022 at 12:30 PM Thanks so much, Sara. Janice

Valsa George November 12, 2022 at 10:42 PM Congratulations on your deseved win, dear Janice! Janice Canerdy November 14, 2022 at 12:30 PM Thanks so much, Valsa. Janice

Valsa George November 10, 2022 at 4:30 AM Beautiful footles, dear friend ! All the Best Janice Canerdy November 10, 2022 at 4:16 PM Thanks so much, Valsa! Janice

Eve Roper November 9, 2022 at 6:34 PM Lots of meaning in the very short rhyming sentences. Blessings my friend Janice Canerdy November 9, 2022 at 7:53 PM Thanks so much, Eve. Janice