On a Merry-Go-Round

Backward
and forward,
across the mall-
will she ever make up 
her mind
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Winter Avatar
July 25, 2009 at 6:12 AM
~lol~ Ha ha! This is so funny Brian! Thanks so much for your congrats, it is dearly appreciated. Also, great to hear you received my mail. Enjoy your summer and I am sure we will be in touch soon. Love & hugs, Shar xoxo
Goff Avatar
July 16, 2009 at 2:29 PM
cool Brian....I see I used a merry-go-round reference the same day you wrote this and I had never seen your fine poem! cool! jim
Richards Avatar
July 13, 2009 at 7:41 AM
Oh...now do you ever sound like my husband!!!! :) Made me laugh so hard!! Thank you again, Brian, for your contests and the time you take to sponsor and judge! :)
Kelly Avatar
July 12, 2009 at 3:08 AM
Just , you keep a tight grip on the wallet . Wait 'till you get to the swings !!! ....
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