On a Merry-Go-Round

Backward and forward, across the mall- will she ever make up her mind

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Sharon Winter

Date: 7/25/2009 6:12:00 AM

~lol~ Ha ha! This is so funny Brian! Thanks so much for your congrats, it is dearly appreciated. Also, great to hear you received my mail. Enjoy your summer and I am sure we will be in touch soon. Love & hugs, Shar xoxo

James Marshall Goff

Date: 7/16/2009 2:29:00 PM

cool Brian....I see I used a merry-go-round reference the same day you wrote this and I had never seen your fine poem! cool! jim

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/13/2009 7:41:00 AM

Oh...now do you ever sound like my husband!!!! :) Made me laugh so hard!! Thank you again, Brian, for your contests and the time you take to sponsor and judge! :)

Sean Kelly

Date: 7/12/2009 3:08:00 AM

Just , you keep a tight grip on the wallet . Wait 'till you get to the swings !!! ....