On a Hamster Wheel

overthinking trains of thought ~ creates a loop and ultimately nought
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Dietrich Avatar
March 17, 2022 at 10:45 PM
so clever. I really like this.
Kavanagh  Avatar
March 18, 2022 at 1:53 AM
Thank you Andrea, sometimes keeping it simple gets us further rather, than overcomplicating and overthinking life, cheers David
Lawless Avatar
March 15, 2022 at 2:15 PM
AH yes, those trains of thought never seem to have any caboose to let you know they've passed...
Kavanagh  Avatar
March 15, 2022 at 3:46 PM
Certainly don’t John, I have so many unfinished poems that have all gone down blind alley’s, just need the inspiration or spark to finish them, cheers David
Cunningham Avatar
March 15, 2022 at 2:04 PM
Lol, been on that wheel many times David. Tom
Kavanagh  Avatar
March 15, 2022 at 3:42 PM
It’s not a nice place to be Tom, I think that’s why I’m sticking with the ku’s, hop on hop off, cheers David
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