On a Hamster Wheel

overthinking trains of thought ~ creates a loop and ultimately nought

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/17/2022 10:45:00 PM

so clever. I really like this.

David Kavanagh
Date: 3/18/2022 1:53:00 AM

Thank you Andrea, sometimes keeping it simple gets us further rather, than overcomplicating and overthinking life, cheers David

John Lawless

Date: 3/15/2022 2:15:00 PM

AH yes, those trains of thought never seem to have any caboose to let you know they've passed...

David Kavanagh
Date: 3/15/2022 3:46:00 PM

Certainly don’t John, I have so many unfinished poems that have all gone down blind alley’s, just need the inspiration or spark to finish them, cheers David

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/15/2022 2:04:00 PM

Lol, been on that wheel many times David. Tom

David Kavanagh
Date: 3/15/2022 3:42:00 PM

It’s not a nice place to be Tom, I think that’s why I’m sticking with the ku’s, hop on hop off, cheers David