On a Felled Muse

a tree can cast shade too any form of matter~ i used to bear fruit

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Jeff Connelly

Date: 7/3/2021 11:21:00 AM

Maureen, since THIS poem is such a peach, you can't say that you "used" to bear fruit.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/20/2021 2:33:00 AM

To me, you are always fruitful :) Hugs. I haven't forgotten you. Too much housework and trying uselessly to killing doves :) xxoo

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/19/2021 5:36:00 AM

Excellent Maureen. Thought provoking :)

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 6/14/2021 1:14:00 PM

My soil has been barren of late too, hope you blossom again :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/1/2021 8:35:00 PM

-- and will again! Renewal will come when least expected. Peace, Gershon

Quoth Theraven

Date: 5/28/2021 11:57:00 AM

Maureen, All those trees that bore such excellent fruit.., provided shade. Before we came along to cut them all down. -Richard

Jan Allison

Date: 5/20/2021 4:31:00 AM

I can relate on many levels mo great ink my friend:-) Hugs Jan xx