On a Cat, Ageing

I love to watch you snoring by the fire,
ensconced between my feet.  The heating’s on,
so bask in luxury, my little one.
That seized-up hip and generous spare tyre
mean you’ll not venture out.  Those days are gone!

But when all else has fled, hope still remains.
Those twitching paws still sing the timeless song,
and in your dreams you’re limber, virile, strong,
cavorting lithely over sunlit plains,
pursuing sparrows one vast summer long.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 9/7/2025 7:05:00 PM
This brought back memories of the dogs I have had in the past, watching them age but remembering their younger years. Congrats and thanks for supporting my contest.
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Michael Coy
Date: 9/7/2025 11:24:00 PM
Nice comment, Rob, and much appreciated. Thanks. Michael
Date: 3/14/2017 9:20:00 AM
I loved talking about cats so much, that I missed that very obvious other reference. That one is so endearing and I love it too :)
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Darren White
Date: 3/14/2017 10:19:00 AM
We will, soon, when you have time again. Yes, profundizar is a great word :)
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Michael Coy
Date: 3/14/2017 9:36:00 AM
Cats are special. We must go into this subject, you and I, some time. I love the Spanish word "profundizar". Profundizaremos nuestro conocimientos, juntos.
Date: 2/27/2017 3:11:00 AM
I live with my sister and her family and four HUGE Maine Coons. At night all four of them are trying to take over my wheelchair, with me in it and all :) They're lovely and I love them. This is so recognizable!
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Michael Coy
Date: 2/27/2017 3:13:00 AM
Ah, a guy with a fondness for animals. You and I are so similar in so many ways!
Date: 2/26/2017 8:29:00 PM
Yes, such times with our old friends. : )
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Michael Coy
Date: 2/26/2017 11:32:00 PM
It's a universal sentiment, I guess. Thank you, Doug!
Date: 2/26/2017 7:40:00 PM
So beautiful, Mike!
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Michael Coy
Date: 2/26/2017 11:32:00 PM
Thank you very much, Kim!
Date: 2/26/2017 3:30:00 PM
Lovely!
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Michael Coy
Date: 2/26/2017 3:30:00 PM
That's very kind of you, Maureen!
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