On a Cat, Ageing

I love to watch you snoring by the fire,
ensconced between my feet.  The heating’s on,
so bask in luxury, my little one.
That seized-up hip and generous spare tyre
mean you’ll not venture out.  Those days are gone!

But when all else has fled, hope still remains.
Those twitching paws still sing the timeless song,
and in your dreams you’re limber, virile, strong,
cavorting lithely over sunlit plains,
pursuing sparrows one vast summer long.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Carmack Avatar
September 7, 2025 at 7:05 PM
This brought back memories of the dogs I have had in the past, watching them age but remembering their younger years. Congrats and thanks for supporting my contest.
Coy Avatar
September 7, 2025 at 11:24 PM
Nice comment, Rob, and much appreciated. Thanks. Michael
White Avatar
March 14, 2017 at 9:20 AM
I loved talking about cats so much, that I missed that very obvious other reference. That one is so endearing and I love it too :)
White Avatar
March 14, 2017 at 10:19 AM
We will, soon, when you have time again. Yes, profundizar is a great word :)
Coy Avatar
March 14, 2017 at 9:36 AM
Cats are special. We must go into this subject, you and I, some time. I love the Spanish word "profundizar". Profundizaremos nuestro conocimientos, juntos.
White Avatar
February 27, 2017 at 3:11 AM
I live with my sister and her family and four HUGE Maine Coons. At night all four of them are trying to take over my wheelchair, with me in it and all :) They're lovely and I love them. This is so recognizable!
Coy Avatar
February 27, 2017 at 3:13 AM
Ah, a guy with a fondness for animals. You and I are so similar in so many ways!
Vinson Avatar
February 26, 2017 at 8:29 PM
Yes, such times with our old friends. : )
Coy Avatar
February 26, 2017 at 11:32 PM
It's a universal sentiment, I guess. Thank you, Doug!
Rodrigues Avatar
February 26, 2017 at 7:40 PM
So beautiful, Mike!
Coy Avatar
February 26, 2017 at 11:32 PM
Thank you very much, Kim!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 26, 2017 at 3:30 PM
Lovely!
Coy Avatar
February 26, 2017 at 3:30 PM
That's very kind of you, Maureen!
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