On a Butterfly's Back

One spring day, An angel plays, A magical play... She made me sit On the back of a butterfly... Huuuh huuuh huuuh Oye yea yea!!! Hmm hmm hmm... I hum... Hsss hsss hss, The breeze sings Hearing our songs The flowers dance O, those lovely moves, dancing angels they are, proved Put us into a trance at the very first glance; Enchanting event, The angels' dance Red, blue, orange, purple and yellow The vibrant colours paint the plain meadow When my butterfly choses a purple one The one which is my favourite, I silently grin Wow!!! Never seen the flowers this close Oh oh!!! Heavenly hues on their clothes Couldn't narrate their cherubic colors "Queens of the earth", certainly they are Savouring the nectar of the flowers The Butterfly has got more power Now she is ready to reach the towers Hurray!!! The sky is now ours My soul outreaches the sky Looks alike, the lows and highs When I see the Earth and beyond My wavering mind lands on the ground When our soul discerns the almighty Our mind becomes very light Purpose of life, it perceives Contentented life it achieves
July -09- 2023

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Date: 7/11/2023 9:53:00 AM
So great to meet you thru this glorious poem! I am a follower now!your perception, descriptions, sounds & sights with the magical concept are wonderful. Made my day! Check your SpMail please. Bravo! with hugs! sally
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Date: 7/10/2023 1:08:00 PM
Ohhhh!! To see earth's beauty through the eyes of a butterfly. Great work you have penned in this one. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 7/10/2023 8:49:00 AM
You write lines of joyful, lighthearted feelings, Supraja. Colours and movement give life to your poem. Truly enjoyed. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 7/10/2023 7:58:00 AM
Beautiful hues on your ride-- on the wings of butterfly. A FAVE for the wonderful imagery--a close up in nature's realms. A dream come true for a nature lover like you, Supraja.
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Date: 7/9/2023 10:07:00 PM
Supraya, your imagination runs riots with this stunning and dazzling poem. Lovely sounds, great flight and wonderful imagery. Well done. Hugs.
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