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OMNISCENCE WRAPPED IN RAGS

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Four centuries stacked like stones, each year a weight on the chest of heaven. Prophets became ash in the wind, their embers cold, their parchments brittle. Then~ not in the temple where men strained to hear, not in the desert where fire once spoke, but in a backwater hovel, where livestock chewed their cud. A gasp. A shudder. A mother’s blood on the earth. And then~ sound. Not the trumpet blast of Sinai, not the whirlwind that answered Job, but the thin, wet wail of newborn lungs, puncturing the quiet like a knife through paper. Omniscience, wrapped in rags, drew its first shuddering breath. The angels, who had bitten their tongues for four hundred years, could not contain themselves~ They split the sky with song, startling shepherds outside Bethlehem’s gates. The first cry was a declaration: Here. The last would be an absolution: Done. Between them~ thirty-three years of footsteps, of splinters, of bread broken, of a voice that refused to go quiet again. When they tried to silence Him with nails, with thorns, the earth itself cracked open and roared No~ because eternity, once loosed, does not return to the tomb.
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Gauthier Avatar
January 2, 2026 at 10:04 AM
Beautifully crafted poem, Sara ~ superb
Hind Avatar
December 23, 2025 at 4:07 PM
A FAV amazing, Sara
Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 24, 2025 at 5:09 PM
thank you, Paige. Grateful for your support and especially for the FAV.
Grubb Avatar
December 23, 2025 at 1:20 PM
The way you move from the hush of the cosmos to that small, trembling first cry is gorgeous. The whole piece glows with both awe and tenderness. Well done, Sara. A fave for me too!
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December 24, 2025 at 5:10 PM
Wow, thank you for your insightful comments and encouragement. I'm grateful for your visit and for your FAVE....means a great deal to me
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