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Omnipresent

Whether within the Deepest abyss existence Could hold Upon the fear and pain Where void unfolds Or Upon the simple Pages that Days bring along With destiny in hand Where one should Behold He is always there… In mind, in pen, in soul

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David Byrne

Date: 2/17/2010 8:21:00 PM

neat one!

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 11/29/2009 10:26:00 AM

Amen, Farah, Amen.

Sami Al-Khalili

Date: 3/23/2009 12:14:00 PM

Incredible as usual dear friend of mine, just outstanding I must say. The ending conclusion hits it all. Your dear friend, Sami.

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 3/4/2009 11:59:00 AM

Farah, This is a beautiful inspirational poem. What a great conclusion! Indeed, He is there in every situation -even in the deepest abyss existence could hold. Very impressive. Thanks for your enlightened comments on my poem May We Smile. Best wishes. -Mohammad. A Quatrain from my book Rubai'yat of Josh Malihabadi: Everyone in the whirlpool of agony caught/ Anguished, sick and suffering lot/ The wise emphasising that God exists/ Foolish confused God is there or not.

Robin L. Gass

Date: 3/1/2009 11:53:00 AM

Perfect title for this deep and lovely write. May he always be there to fill us with His light! Beautiful, Farah.. Love, Robin

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/1/2009 6:05:00 AM

Hey Farah, just want to say hi and how great it is hearing from you, and thanks for your comment. Hope life is treating you real good. Hugs, Shar xoxo

Sara Lokken

Date: 3/1/2009 6:05:00 AM

This is very wise and beautiful, Farah. You have reached into your depths again. Keep writing! Best wishes, Sara:)

Michael Jordan

Date: 2/6/2009 11:58:00 AM

Farah my young poetic friend how are you - I loved the concluding line in this poem - Whoever we conceive him to be i reckon it's best he is there always - God Bless, MJ

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 2/6/2009 2:35:00 AM

Yes, yes, yes, so true, and you write beautifully, and with light. love, Kristin

Sharon Winter

Date: 2/5/2009 12:48:00 PM

So wise and powerful. You are an old soul, and your words never disappoint. Hey Farah, so great to read you. Awesome write. Love, Shar