Get Your Premium Membership

Ominous Cloud

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Sotto Poet.


Mist Slides forth From the peak of curving heights slants fade in purity, dismal, and droop You're now at the same level as the trees. the haze sneaks forth. the footbridge looming cloud
Written: February 11, 2022 A Strand (1072) Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 2/12/2022 5:02:00 AM
I see the haze-well crafted imagery, Lasaad.
Login to Reply
Date: 2/11/2022 3:07:00 PM
yes, I feel strongly in here the ominous feellng!!
Login to Reply
Date: 2/11/2022 2:29:00 PM
Beautiful..interesting fluidity…
Login to Reply
Date: 2/11/2022 2:11:00 PM
I really like and relate to your sinuous description of this scenery. Well done Lasaad!...ab
Login to Reply

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry