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Ominous Cloud

Mist Slides forth From the peak of curving heights slants fade in purity, dismal, and droop You're now at the same level as the trees. the haze sneaks forth. the footbridge looming cloud
Written: February 11, 2022 A Strand (1072) Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Pandit Avatar
February 12, 2022 at 5:02 AM
I see the haze-well crafted imagery, Lasaad.
Dietrich Avatar
February 11, 2022 at 3:07 PM
yes, I feel strongly in here the ominous feellng!!
Rodrigues Avatar
February 11, 2022 at 2:29 PM
Beautiful..interesting fluidity…
Boles Avatar
February 11, 2022 at 2:11 PM
I really like and relate to your sinuous description of this scenery. Well done Lasaad!...ab
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