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Omega Slumbers

Peace slumbering giant, rest in this garden Alpha waits on the other side, the guardian.

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Nancy Jones

Date: 8/3/2011 6:53:00 PM

Wow... it's like a prayer. Very beautimous.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/31/2011 4:59:00 PM

So much said in this short verse, Tim. I hope when I slumber, the guardian is waiting for me too in the garden of eternal peace. Lovely! Best wishes, Carolyn

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/31/2011 1:07:00 PM

oh my, tim... such a deep spiritual undertone perking so lightly here.. i like the way you alluded to rest through words like " giant, garden, guardian.." very well- thought of , then to slip in alpha--the beginning of another life ( for me, a symbolism)... i hail this!.. love your style:) huggs, nette

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/31/2011 11:42:00 AM

Interesting one. I was thinking about that word Alpha the other day because my vet says probably my one cat is an Alpha cat! the Alphas are very powerful!

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 7/31/2011 8:18:00 AM

Very nice Tim... and you are very welcome .... Michael