Olympian Wonders

Dance of neurons is perceptible not on paper with ink only All gazed at the sprinting poetry with its look at new sunrise In Rio Olympics in hundred meters in just 9.81 seconds When Usain Bolt muscled out the poem of sprinting with elan Securing gold and the epithet of the fastest man on sweet earth Adding a new crest to the ever heightening Olympic mania In Rio Aesthetics of gleaming muscles height and stride flying on track So did the Indian girl who lost the medal but won millions of hearts As she performed Produnova vault with a mind blowing bird’s rhythm Mesmerizing the spectators with her limbic poetry of gymnastics Limbs of Deepa Karmakar resembling wings of birds in splendid flight As she incredibly and charmingly came down from the dream vacuum Through the ‘vault of death’, with a front handspring, off the vault table Then daringly done two and a half somersaults in the air risking even death Birds of maniac ecstasy flying high in the Olympian colours My garden, darling, brims in beauty of your lyrical laughter _____________________________________________________________ 19 August, 2016: For Olympic Mania – Poetry Contest: Sponsored by Janis Thompson

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Date: 8/20/2016 7:47:00 AM
Olympics were the way Man would honor the Gods in ancient Greece! The spirit of the Olympics leaves on with some variation but the two examples you bring forth my friend, Probir, reflect the ancient spirit! Excellent writing that deserves an Olympic medal my friend! A 7!
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Date: 8/21/2016 12:31:00 AM
You seem to be a little biased! ... But then welcome ... And thank you ...
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