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Tropical, ocean tides, that flow and seek Blue sea sparkles resplendent with foam peaks Soft music strums, magicked the stars delight To shimmer and wink in the sky, so bright In to the water, a fisherman falls Death stalked and beckoned to the coral halls Sweet Olookaylani, you came for me Siren mermaid, sleek, glorious beauty I muse in you, my love, do you hear me? Ukulele sounds drift enchantingly Are you the light that flashes yes, I sea Sweet Olookaylani, come back for me Moon glows, bioluminescence, salt sprays Love longs, warm breezes, blow kisses your way Entered in “Beautiful Sonnet Contest” Sponsor: William Kekaula Placed 7th

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Date: 8/15/2019 7:28:00 AM
My congratulations on such a high place in the contest. Unfortunately, I couldn't take part in it, but it doesn't cancel my joy and pleasure to see this remarkable poem among winners)
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Date: 7/12/2019 8:09:00 AM
What a wonderful sonnet with beautiful imagery, Georgia, best of luck in the contest. John
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Georgia Kereopa
Date: 7/13/2019 1:57:00 AM
thank you John, if only I could fit in champagne and food as well
Date: 7/6/2019 5:34:00 AM
Your imagery is gorgeous! What a glorious poem!
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Georgia Kereopa
Date: 7/7/2019 12:08:00 AM
Thank you Caren, ‘water is life’
Date: 7/5/2019 2:03:00 PM
A salt, a warm and a bioluminescent sonnet. I think I'm going to take part in William's contest too)
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Georgia Kereopa
Date: 7/5/2019 8:32:00 PM
Kurt, the beauty of the Great Barrier Reef is breathtaking. I look forward to reading your entry.
Date: 7/5/2019 9:28:00 AM
This certainly is a beautiful sonnet! Reads like a winner to me <3
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Georgia Kereopa
Date: 7/5/2019 8:31:00 PM
Thank you. PS, my first sonnet so was a little worried about keeping to the guidelines and what fun to write with brevity.