Olive Oil Confessions

The bottle pours too fast,
gold-green streaks darkening the wood.

It smells like something honest,
I wipe it clean
before anyone notices.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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January 17, 2025 at 6:03 PM
Great contrast!
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