Oletimers

I can hear Granny yelling, she's calling 
me from the kitchen, as I'm outside in 

the driveway walking towards the garage 
door.  Then I, here Granny say, "David, come in here,

hurry". As I, rush in to the house, then slide 
across the kitchen floor and make my way through

the living room to, find Granny talking, to 
some one, who really isn't there. "Would you 

please, tell these kids to stop running every
where, ask them, not to sit on the coffee 

table. I don't want them jumping around 
or acting funny. I'm afraid, one of 

them might get hurt, that coffe table cost 
alot of money. Then, as if, none of,

this ever occurred, She said, "David, guess
who this is, don't you remember her". She 

looked at me with, a blank face and said,
"She's, Abes little girl, Rebecca, hugging
 
firmly at the air. Grandma pulls her in 
and gives her a big kiss, on the side of 

her face, then mumbles, "Grandma loves you". She
then points to the left and say's, "There's his boy, 

Danny",would you look how big he is. "Go
play outside".  She yells, to kids who aren't there.

Nervous,  I agreed with what, she asked and 
sent the kids outside. Going along with 

her. I said, Granny my kids are here too,
look out there on the steps. She looks at the 

door, then says, "you kids come on in here". Why, 
did you leave them out there on the steps. She

begins to scold me, "don't you know it is'nt
safe." Then as if, none of this just occurred, she

looks at me very. pleasantly,smiles 
confused, then tears and says, "Who did you say

you were again" then sits and bows her head.
Granny, then says to me, "I don't know what's 

wrong, do you think, I'm going crazy." No!
I said, " you were just remembering a 

good day, we had. It's like dreaming while you're
awake. Don't worry Granny, everything's

fine you're not crazy, you're doing okay,
I'll be here for you, by your side I'll stay.



Dedicated To: Jennie Rodriquez ( My Granny)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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