"ole Dog" :Inspired By Richard Pickett Poetry

Ole dog sniffin' don't know what,
His daddy was a beagle, 
His mama was a mutt,
Long ears draggin' on the ground,
Loose skinned forehead 
makin him frown,
Tail up and waggin' like a victory flag,
Dog years showin' 
In his belly sag.
Old and gray but ain't ready to die,
Got a limp in his walk,
But a sparkle in his eye,
He knows his master will be calllin' him home,
And reward his huntin' with a big ole bone.
He lives for the love of that rough old man,
Adores him for a while
And gently licks his hand.
After a bit, Ole Dog will sprawl 
by the fire on the rug,
And dream 'bout huntin''
With "Jackson the Pug".
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

A   Avatar
January 1, 2013 at 12:30 PM
Hello Robert' making an appearance on the soup today. Only 2 wish you this coming year to be a glorious one in which rewards all your future poetry with success. I love the time I took out of the first day of the year. 1-1-2013* :-) Just to wish you the best of 2013. Take care my dear poet friend. Thank you for sharing the Poem about my friend TAZ... always~ pd
Pickett Avatar
November 8, 2010 at 8:02 AM
Jackson would be proud of this one Bob...heheheh I like it. God Bless...Taz
Knop Avatar
July 5, 2010 at 12:27 PM
Very nice poem, Robert! I always had a dog - and sometimes even three - before moving into a flat in town! Enjoyed your write and thanks for your comments...Gert
Culverhouse Avatar
May 11, 2010 at 7:35 PM
cute poem, love it
Kendrick Avatar
May 3, 2010 at 4:44 AM
Great rhyme and rhythm in this one love the theme and humor...Kinda like a metaphor for another species...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
Phillips Avatar
May 1, 2010 at 6:22 PM
what a wonderful poem tugged at my heart strings. I love dogs keep up that creative pen
White Avatar
April 28, 2010 at 9:48 PM
I love the hunting Pug lol
Green Avatar
April 28, 2010 at 8:17 PM
HAHA! I LOVE this!
Pickett Avatar
April 28, 2010 at 7:15 PM
I don't know what inspired this rhyme but I am certain my father will be stoked when he reads it.... Good poem here my friend...You should enter my contest the Sestina......:JP]
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace