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OLDNESS

OLDNESS Once I had freckles, now I have wrinkles. Chalk it up to my oldness. Once there was presence, replaced by flatulence Oftentimes caused by my oldness. Many’s the time I wanted to rhyme and pour out my feelings on paper, but life interfered and my choices were veered and I thought I would get to it later. So later is now and I find myself older And taking the reins, I face life much bolder By learning new things and seeing wild visions and blessing each day throughout every season. When this lifetime ends and another begins I’ll count those as friends who wield mighty pens.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/7/2013 12:59:00 PM
I am sure my freckles will turn to wrinkles in due time, too. ;) Wrinkles are merely a sign of wisdom! :) Have an amazing day, your poem is wonderful. Hugs!
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maggie huffman
Date: 4/7/2013 5:37:00 PM
thanks, Anne, i enjoy my oldness, whatever befalls...love your comments...very special
Date: 4/7/2013 12:13:00 PM
maggie ha join the club...David
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maggie huffman
Date: 4/7/2013 5:40:00 PM
thanks, David...couldn't be in better company, i'm sure. thanks for commenting
Date: 4/7/2013 11:27:00 AM
Your poem was sad. Thanks for the read.
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maggie huffman
Date: 4/7/2013 5:35:00 PM
how sweet that you thought my poem was sad...i hope you meant in feeling and not how it's written..haha...thanks for your comments, Robert...very important to me