Oldest Too Long

I've been the oldest too long,
this only feels like an unhappy home;
I've been the oldest too long, now
it seems like I've done everything wrong..
the oldest too long,
now im wishing for a happy home;
this is just the talk of one whose been the oldest too long...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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July 3, 2011 at 2:17 AM
be astonished of being alive....hehehe...great emotional write..^_^ junjun
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