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Oldest Rictameter

Purring
contentedly
just being with my love
and basking in the afterglow
of our ascent to the peak of pleasure,
I now settle, spent and cozy,
in the crook of his arm
like a kitty -
purring.

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 6/28/2017 2:54:00 PM

Real sweet gem, Andrea. Hidden away in a not oft used form. Very romantic ... purrrr! Love and hugs.

Daver Austin

Date: 8/1/2013 9:48:00 AM

Somehow I missed this one along the way. Love, daver

Daver Austin

Date: 8/1/2013 9:46:00 AM

Love it. A good poet has a way of handling intimate expression - a poor one will say, I sure do love you baybeee, and I don't mean maybe...You steal my heart away, I mean day after day. This one of yours shows great imagination. Love, daver

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/18/2013 8:03:00 AM

Purrrfect write, Andrea! I really like this one! Congrats on your win! (I would have placed it higher) Love, Kim

Tim Ryerson

Date: 7/15/2013 3:44:00 PM

Ohhh yes indeeed!...That must have been some kind of ascent up a very high mountain my friend!...Yes, you have captured those beautiful, totally relaxed moments afterwards so very well...LOVE the purring kitty reference...Congratulations - Tim

Tim Ryerson
Date: 7/15/2013 3:45:00 PM

And I gotta try this form sometime (If I could ever learn how to center my poems!)

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 7/15/2013 9:15:00 AM

Contentment and happiness shines in this sweet write! Big congrats. Hugs

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 7/15/2013 8:41:00 AM

A beautiful image. Nothing better than to be in the crook of your lover's arm. Congrats on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/14/2013 10:38:00 PM

Congrats on your win. stopping by to say good night. LOVE *LINDA

Skat A

Date: 7/14/2013 10:15:00 PM

Andrea, Congratulations, with your awesome winning poem. ;-) Enjoy my latest blog if you like. Always loving and enjoying the soup ~ SKAT ~

Justin Bordner

Date: 8/2/2012 6:30:00 PM

You make it all seem so right Andrea! Simple pleasures make the heart love tresures - J.A.B.

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 6/26/2012 8:32:00 PM

Congrats on your win! A sweet piece, full of passion and warmth. Blessings, Keith

Robert Johnson

Date: 6/11/2012 3:11:00 PM

Life's Good. :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/5/2012 11:07:00 AM

A belated congratulations on your placement in Nette's contest Andrea. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/4/2012 3:34:00 PM

Congrats on your win..Perfectly passionate..Sara

Joseph May

Date: 6/3/2012 8:03:00 PM

congrats on your win Andrea..and thanks for your vote...see my reply..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/3/2012 6:34:00 PM

ha ha~ Another one Andrea , Congratulations with your fun "SOUND OF EMOTION" entry in Nette's xool contest. take care ~always :-) PD

Matthew Anish

Date: 6/3/2012 6:25:00 PM

What a clever sensuos poem! I have never seen this form before. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Kash Poet

Date: 6/3/2012 1:49:00 PM

Yeahhhh....congrats!!!!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/3/2012 9:56:00 AM

andie, i like how you used the kitten's purr to speak of affection.. fascinating!.. congrats on your win in my " tourney!"..:) hugggs!

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 6/3/2012 7:38:00 AM

Wonderful piece,Andrea.Great work..Congratulations on your win...

David Williams

Date: 6/3/2012 5:29:00 AM

Andrea super congrats on your win, you little puddy cat you..big smiles now..David

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/2/2012 5:01:00 PM

Yes, they went through ,,i scoped them out... Andrea,, I'm laughing at the soup mail i send you.. he he he...your gonna think I've gone crazy.. well..maybe just a little bit...I don't think, there's a poet pill out there, that can calm me down,, anyways ANdrea, My hairs on fire, and my eye's are filled of glee... and my smile is going all hay-wire.. I think,, you call it an EVIL GRIN.... I'm explosive right now.. Like the time I joined the soup.. xoxoxooxoxo,,xoxoox xoxoox xooxox xoox always...your little sneaky PD

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/2/2012 5:28:00 PM

Settle down, lady. Now that I know how much you hate being called lady, there is something else to make ya nuts! haha. I mean what I said. Hate is NOT good for you!!! Retract those claws, little puddy cat!! Just try to be a nice kitty!!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/2/2012 4:17:00 PM

meow!!!!!! hiss hiss ** scratch scratch~~ meow~ MEOOOOW!!! good luck in the contest,..pd

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/2/2012 1:46:00 PM

Very passionate work..Enjoyed reading...I believe that the crook will be in circle of the top poems..Thanks for stopping by my work..Sara