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Oldest Aspen in My Grove

I took root in a stand of golden aspen trees
My bark resembled dark eyes all over me.
I am the oldest of the ancients in my grove,
spared thus far from the fires of a stove.

Every fall I'm forced to forfeit my dense leaves.
They're taken by the wind, and my heart grieves
but nature has to obey and follow its course...
for there's no escaping its incredible force.

My Spring clothing turned into golden dresses
that appear to be sheered as if they were tresses
upon my branches and limbs, curved and bent,
Another season passes me by; another year spent.

I'll have to face another Winter, arms laid bare
for my leaves were taken, and none were spared
to keep me warm on those cold January nights
but I will dream of Spring instead of my plights.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Kitchin Avatar
August 4, 2026 at 3:32 AM
Lin, a beautiful poem, you captured the essence of an aspen tree through the seasons with wonderful imagery.
Lane Avatar
August 4, 2026 at 6:14 AM
Thanks, Tania. Glad you appreciated it.
Daniel Avatar
August 4, 2026 at 2:50 AM
Wow! I like your rhyme, Lin😊
Smith  Avatar
August 4, 2026 at 12:22 AM
Lovely verse on the deciduous Aspen.❤️
Lane Avatar
August 4, 2026 at 6:13 AM
Thanks, Alison.
Gibbons Avatar
August 3, 2026 at 3:57 PM
Wow Lin an awesome creative write ✍️ from your heart n soul. I'm a lover of trees so got to fav this today.So inspires me too." My bark resembled dark eyes all over me " sheer poetic love 👀❤️
Lane Avatar
August 4, 2026 at 6:13 AM
Thanks ever so much, Dotti. I'm a tree hugger, too.
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