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Oldest and Best Valentine

OLDEST AND BEST VALENTINE oh dear, me-oh-my valentine’s day, all the rage the headlines – front page two weeks away, but big news and here i sit – lost my muse oh what can i do? i must invent clever words sweetest ever heard searching, everything to lose and here i sit – lost my muse this desperate thought world’s biggest box of candy a handy dandy as last resort let’s try it but no! she’s on a diet i must give up cannot even make a start save her broken heart just three words will have to do i’ll kiss and whisper, i love you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/1/2013 11:37:00 AM
Sweet as chocolates, Daver, and much less fattening. How are you, my friend? I enjoyed your buttons and buttocks comment to my poem the other day!!
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Date: 1/31/2013 7:27:00 PM
Cleverly written dear poet, and romantic as well ! I enjoyed mucho ! Happy to read you again dear friend! Have a wonderful evening...much love, james
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Date: 1/31/2013 5:56:00 PM
So nice to read your write this evening. Light & Love
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Date: 1/31/2013 5:43:00 PM
Enjoyed this valentine piece Daver, as I see, did Mickkie Mac D.." I think people do sense true affections, so no need to invent clever wording, simple and true will win you through.."
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Date: 1/31/2013 4:26:00 PM
These are the best Valentine gifts, Daver...Just those "three words" :) Sometimes we can get lost in trying something new. I'd written a short Valentine greeting to someone years ago and I never heard from him again. "Be mine turpentine" just didn't do the trick!:)) Have a great week...Love, Mikki
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Date: 1/30/2013 12:28:00 PM
Daver ha just wonderful, delightful read...David
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