Older and Smarter

Longer tasks get slow.
as we have become older.
an astute action.

analogyoldsmartsenryu

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David Kavanagh

August 3, 2021 at 3:29 PM

Wisdom in your words Lasaad, we all must listen and pay heed to what our bodies are telling us, and if some tasks take longer to do, at least it will not be a rushed job and it will be done right, a fine honest senryu Lasaad, cheers David

Sotto Poet

August 3, 2021 at 5:08 PM

Thank you so much, David, your kind words shed more allure on my poem, and it's so much appreciated, indeed, my friend. Every age has its particular challenges. I wish you good health forever, and I really want to have your point of view on my poem All-time Haikus, if possible, of course. Blessings and best regards

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 3, 2021 at 11:39 AM

- ... it does not matter ... maybe slow, but we appreciate more what we have done, Las :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Delice Arleen Skelly

August 3, 2021 at 9:49 AM

Energy is very precious, I use it sparingly...Delice

Sara Kendrick

August 2, 2021 at 3:16 PM

When I get up each morning, I only have so much energy so my energy determines what gets done. LOL..I like your thoughts on this as well. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara