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Longer tasks get slow. as we have become older. an astute action.

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David Kavanagh

Date: 8/3/2021 3:29:00 PM

Wisdom in your words Lasaad, we all must listen and pay heed to what our bodies are telling us, and if some tasks take longer to do, at least it will not be a rushed job and it will be done right, a fine honest senryu Lasaad, cheers David

Sotto Poet
Date: 8/3/2021 5:08:00 PM

Thank you so much, David, your kind words shed more allure on my poem, and it's so much appreciated, indeed, my friend. Every age has its particular challenges. I wish you good health forever, and I really want to have your point of view on my poem All-time Haikus, if possible, of course. Blessings and best regards

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/3/2021 11:39:00 AM

- ... it does not matter ... maybe slow, but we appreciate more what we have done, Las :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 8/3/2021 9:49:00 AM

Energy is very precious, I use it sparingly...Delice

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/2/2021 3:16:00 PM

When I get up each morning, I only have so much energy so my energy determines what gets done. LOL..I like your thoughts on this as well. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/2/2021 12:10:00 PM

Good one Lasaad, we get there in the end. Tom

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/2/2021 11:09:00 AM

Hi Lasaad, I agree with your wise words. Have a wonderful day, my friend:-) Alexis

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/2/2021 11:07:00 AM

Hello Tayeb Lasaad, Things still get done even when it is done slower. Enjoy your day my friend.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 8/2/2021 10:38:00 AM

Oh, this is so true, Lasaad. They get slower as do we. But, as you, I would like to think that as we get older we become more astute in our actions.