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I will be blithe tonight.
The wind is high
I will walk alone beneath the sky
I will not let it happen, this tendency
To see oneself so righteous, so sober
The monotony of age overcoming
Rejecting what is curious, young and free
Because they are young, never will I act
As though their wholeness could be packed
Into that fragment of their knowledge, their youth
I will be a person,  a growing cell
I will retain the right to wish and rebel
I will throw octopus arms that will invisibly grow
To squeeze a thought, which once ran swift and keen
Not into a stodgy pattern of routine
I will look at the sky tonight
And count the stars tonight
And I will make a wish
And I will dream of young things....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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O'Leary Avatar
July 22, 2009 at 5:22 PM
Great poem! I like the image of the "octopus arms". That is creative! Thanks for commenting on my poetry! I appreciate it!
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July 22, 2009 at 3:41 PM
Some folks tend to give up (or give in) too often as they get older. How wonderful it is to know we have the option to "dream of young things" and resurrect the magical excitement of youth again. Wonderful write, Carrie! Love, Carolyn
Freeman Avatar
July 22, 2009 at 3:32 PM
Your thoughts put together quite well, God Bless, Moses
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