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Old Willow:

Leaves touch the pond, An old willow slowly dies, Humbled as it leans.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Cresswell Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 8:13 AM
Lovely poem for a majestic elder.
Herlihy Avatar
April 24, 2017 at 2:24 PM
Love this haiku. Jealous. Well done. John
Wolf Avatar
April 24, 2017 at 7:32 PM
Thanks kindly, John /|\
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