Old West Crush

brilliance bona fide in redolent skies
keen red submerging, clementine twilight
sunflowers show-offs of the waning sun
wedged within burnt orange escarpments
swifts of volcanic horizon in desert crags
old West crush corralled in surround-hugs
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Hind Avatar
June 22, 2024 at 3:56 PM
You have such an unusual and deep voice, your writings are often worthy of more than one read, it's like your seeing someone's true face, that is at least what I got...loved it
Rodrigues Avatar
June 22, 2024 at 7:22 PM
Thank you so much! <3
Goldsmith Avatar
June 22, 2024 at 8:56 AM
I enjoyed reading your colorful "Old West Crush" write. Wonderful...  Have A Blessed Day/Weekend Writing Away.............
Rodrigues Avatar
June 22, 2024 at 7:23 PM
Have a blessed weekend! Thanks, Paula!
One Avatar
June 22, 2024 at 6:27 AM
What an awesome selection of word usage here... love this one..
Rodrigues Avatar
June 22, 2024 at 7:23 PM
Thank you so much for your encouragement. Hugs ~ Kim
Horne Avatar
June 22, 2024 at 6:12 AM
quite the wow factor here - love it
Rodrigues Avatar
June 22, 2024 at 7:24 PM
Thank you, Jack!
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