Old Shoes

These old shoes did walk
Shabby chic shines thru the grime
Look at them they talk
They have taken me nowhere
That I did not want to go
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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January 25, 2017 at 12:09 AM
That second line is simply wonderful! This is the very short story of a long journey.
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January 25, 2017 at 12:44 AM
A very long journey indeed. Thanks Darren. JH
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