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Old Shoe Love

My faithful old shoe More precious than new It fits like a glove It feels like true love Much like me and you Its shine will fade I will not trade My comfy shoe Vows to renew: Tender care Mend all tear Hold more dear Old shoe I love YOU December 10, 2019

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Eve Roper

Date: 12/29/2019 9:48:00 PM

very good verse, good luck in the contest.

Rico Leffanta

Date: 12/10/2019 5:01:00 PM

I felt that way about my old shoes, so my mother-in-law tossed them in the rubbish bin. Aloha! Rico

Margarita Lillico
Date: 12/10/2019 6:24:00 PM

Oh those mothers-in-law:)

John Gondolf

Date: 12/10/2019 3:24:00 PM

Something very comfortable about an old pair of shoes or a seasoned relationship. Nicely written, Margarita. All the best my friend. Hugs, John

Margarita Lillico
Date: 12/10/2019 6:26:00 PM

John, one detail has been deliberately omitted: we have quite a FEW of those shoes, to name a few:))) M.

Na Na

Date: 12/10/2019 2:47:00 PM

Hi Margarita I agree with you. Takes time to break the new in then you dont wan tto part with it :) Thanks for sharing