Margarita Lillico Poet Diminished Hexaverse

Old Shoe Love

My faithful old shoe
More precious than new 
It fits like a glove
It feels like true love
Much like me and you

Its shine will fade 
I will not  trade
My comfy shoe
Vows to renew:

Tender care
Mend all tear
Hold more dear

Old shoe
I love 

YOU

December 10, 2019 

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Eve Roper December 29, 2019 at 9:48 PM very good verse, good luck in the contest.

Rico Leffanta December 10, 2019 at 5:01 PM I felt that way about my old shoes, so my mother-in-law tossed them in the rubbish bin. Aloha! Rico Margarita Lillico December 10, 2019 at 6:24 PM Oh those mothers-in-law:)

John Gondolf December 10, 2019 at 3:24 PM Something very comfortable about an old pair of shoes or a seasoned relationship. Nicely written, Margarita. All the best my friend. Hugs, John Margarita Lillico December 10, 2019 at 6:26 PM John, one detail has been deliberately omitted: we have quite a FEW of those shoes, to name a few:))) M.

Na Na December 10, 2019 at 2:47 PM Hi Margarita I agree with you. Takes time to break the new in then you dont wan tto part with it :) Thanks for sharing