Old Rat

He lives in the hole and hidden places ,
Devouring foodstuff and books in cases ,
He tries to escape the cat
But falls into trap on mat ,
Which makes the old rat to see dead faces .

8-31-2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Kendrick Avatar
September 18, 2018 at 10:30 AM
I have read your humorous short work and wanted to say congrats on your win ..Way to go.. Sara
Dietrich Avatar
September 13, 2018 at 3:38 PM
Back again with my congratulations on your win.
Gauthier Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 11:59 PM
Congrats on your win, Olusegun.
Messina Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 12:12 PM
Thank god for rat traps..lol Well done and congratulations, Olusegun...on your win in my contest...Charlie
Dietrich Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 8:44 PM
Nicely done, Olusegun. Good luck in the contest.
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