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Some poems describe passions stirred 
With others written undeterred 
Unloved I fell apart
A piece on thinking love absurd
And one declares a love unheard
I wrote them from the heart
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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October 28, 2011 at 6:45 PM
Interesting slant on the topic. The last line is a good conclusion. Thank you for sharing this poem with us. Karen
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September 21, 2011 at 2:30 PM
thankxx Jack for many congrats and sweet comments luv... moving is such a chore and can be a bore but we are all singing in the rain trying to move about the raindrops.. oh.. at least another 30 days .. where does one accrue so much?
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September 20, 2011 at 7:00 PM
Nice write,Jack.Congrats on your win....
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September 19, 2011 at 11:28 PM
Sounds like your papers were love stories. Congratulations on your win. Lee
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September 19, 2011 at 10:48 PM
Congrats on your win, Jack. Excellent piece. Nice going. Thanks for your recent comments. Ralph
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September 19, 2011 at 10:45 AM
CONGRATS JACK ON SECOND PLACE WIN WITH WONDERFUL WORDS MY FRIEND..LUV..
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September 19, 2011 at 9:36 AM
How nice Jack. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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September 19, 2011 at 7:45 AM
Congratulations on your placement in my contest Jack. Love, Carol
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September 17, 2011 at 8:32 PM
And you do write from the heart, very creatively too I might say.
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September 17, 2011 at 4:21 PM
Good luck in Carol's contest with this creative way of describing your works scribled upon scraps of paper..Winner indeed..Ginko helps with circulation which helps with anything that has to do with poor circulation..Sara
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September 16, 2011 at 6:35 PM
write on! namaste~N
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September 16, 2011 at 3:48 PM
all the greatest poetry comes from the heart Jack and true life experiences luv.. an electric piece igniting old memories luv..
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September 16, 2011 at 3:03 PM
It sure is so fun to look back on old poems and reminisce what inspired each one-- you made me smile with this Jack, and you are right I can relate to that, writing from the heart-- sorry to hear about your close friend though, people are never the same again when abuse happens... I also have someone very close to me and that inspired that write, thank you for your thoughts in that poem...
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September 16, 2011 at 2:51 PM
Great write so much expressed in six lines of verse love can heal and not feeling loved can vex your heart and mind..deep meaning I find in this amazing write...with love...your mate.....old Jack
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September 16, 2011 at 2:31 PM
This is a great write describing the multitude of different poems you have written! I love the last line, "I wrote them from the heart" because that is what I do with my poetry!! Fantastic poem!!
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