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Old Persons Lament

I am sitting here in a chair.....yet my minds is still my own, why do people whisper about you out loud making you feel all alone Discussing my this and that Personal things I wouldn’t share Can’t they see I am feeling distressed Don’t they care!!! Why is it when you’re old People think you’ve lost the plot Old, yes, I might be wrinkled But invisible I am not. So next you visit someone old, Don’t talk as though they don’t care, Smile include them in the talk, Not just leave them in a chair. Penned 17/2/2017

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Date: 2/24/2017 12:40:00 AM
This is so true, Seren...I worked with elderly people for many years and saw this disrespect and disregard often, sometimes from their own family members...well done and congrats! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 2/22/2017 7:51:00 PM
Came back to say "congrats!!!"
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Date: 2/22/2017 1:41:00 PM
Painful if the mind is right, congratulations Seren, well done...
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Date: 2/22/2017 9:54:00 AM
This reminds me of taking my sharp as a tack father to the Medical clinic. The consultant spoke to me, not him. It opened my eyes that day to how it must feel for the elderly. Well done on your placement Seren.
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Date: 2/21/2017 9:50:00 PM
WoW Seren, that is so true! And I can relate even though I am not old lol. Congratulations
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Date: 2/21/2017 11:05:00 PM
thx Darren anyone over 25 to you is old ....Seren
Date: 2/21/2017 9:48:00 PM
Bravo, need more voices like yours Seren!
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Date: 2/21/2017 11:07:00 PM
I see these pictures on tv. they all look as though they have given up. All they need is someone to talk with them....Seren
Date: 2/21/2017 5:38:00 PM
coming back with congrats!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/21/2017 11:08:00 PM
thank you once more...Seren
Date: 2/19/2017 7:32:00 PM
GREAT message and so important for us to treat them with the respect they deserve. Good luck in the contest, dear.
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Date: 2/21/2017 11:09:00 PM
Hi Andrea hope the message helps a few people of the older generation......Seren
Date: 2/18/2017 10:17:00 PM
This may seem crazy, I dont see age well, I see the persons journey, and the tales they could tell. ( if that makes any sense) Loved the sentiment and emotion here!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/21/2017 11:10:00 PM
thank you.....Seren
Date: 2/17/2017 2:56:00 PM
Beautifully written wisdom to heed :)
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/21/2017 11:08:00 PM
thank you Maureen....Seren
Date: 2/17/2017 7:48:00 AM
Interesting take on the prompt, and so true, Seren. Good luck in the contest.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/17/2017 8:02:00 AM
Thank you Agnes, I always try to take a different road with my words.....Seren
Date: 2/17/2017 5:57:00 AM
Talk with the not about them.... Beautiful words
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Date: 2/17/2017 6:59:00 AM
thanks Tim how is hopalong today....Seren

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