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Old Moon Rises

In the dark sky the old moon rises moving very high buying by the prices the old moon buys whatever it likes THE OLD MOON RISES

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/15/2010 10:12:00 PM
I don't quite know why i did. It felt more compelling to me that The New Moon Rises. But i understand if u dont understand. And thank you i am glad you enjoyed it.
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Date: 5/14/2010 9:54:00 PM
Why you say the Old Moon? Moon is always fresh and new
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Date: 5/14/2010 9:40:00 PM
nice write, enjoyed
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