Old Moon Rises

In the dark sky
the old moon rises
moving very high
buying by the prices
the old moon buys
whatever it likes
THE OLD MOON RISES
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Toles Avatar
May 15, 2010 at 10:12 PM
I don't quite know why i did. It felt more compelling to me that The New Moon Rises. But i understand if u dont understand. And thank you i am glad you enjoyed it.
Mehta Avatar
May 14, 2010 at 9:54 PM
Why you say the Old Moon? Moon is always fresh and new
A   Avatar
May 14, 2010 at 9:40 PM
nice write, enjoyed
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