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Old Mill Building

vacant building burns fire reaches up to sky so hot steel frame melts old brick structure collapses people say it's about time

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/24/2012 8:30:00 AM
We be sipping on new wine...forgive me i couldn't help myself...peace and blessings Victoria!
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Victoria Oliver
Date: 6/24/2012 7:12:00 PM
I think we all wanted to sip some wine when that building went down - it was arson - I guess someone couldn't wait any longer!

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