Dr.Ram Mehta Poet Couplet

Old Memories Refreshed

Fresh memory of first love never fades away
Old memory is like flowers smelt yesterday.

After very long time, I took out my suite
Cornered in the wardrobe on a hanger.
I found a long familiar hair in the collar
That curly hair of a beauty who drew me to her.

An exalting smell
Of the *Bocheron perfume
I do remember.

*Brand name of the perfume

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April 15, 2014
Form: Couplets, Quatrain and haiku
Dr. Ram Mehta
Third Place win
Contest: The Three Suite stanza by Sheri Fresonke Harper

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Robin Davis May 1, 2014 at 9:29 PM Dr. Ram What a beautifully written poem about keeping memories alive with our senses. Thank you for the great comment on my Lipstick poem

Joyce Johnson April 26, 2014 at 6:19 PM congratlations on a great win. Joyce

Sara Kendrick April 26, 2014 at 2:36 PM Creative use of the contest's idea...Way to go with this winner..Congrats..Sara

Carrie Richards April 26, 2014 at 11:12 AM This is a beauty, Dr. Ram.......bringing alive all the senses !! Congratulations on your win !!!

Paul Callus April 26, 2014 at 6:33 AM Enjoyable write Dr. It's a wonder how some old memories manage to stay so fresh in the mind. congrats on your win. // paul

Sheri Fresonke Harper April 25, 2014 at 9:19 PM Dr. Ram Mehta, one of your more sensual poems, very vivid, I can picture it well. Congratulations on your win, thanks for entering my contest. Dr.Ram Mehta April 26, 2014 at 6:28 AM Thanks, Sheri, for the appreciation

Debbie Duncan April 22, 2014 at 12:03 AM Oh I like this very much, thank you for coming to read my " Shadows " thank you for my poem being featured this week :) have an awesome !

Ilene Bauer April 15, 2014 at 2:33 PM nice one! i like the whole image of the hair caught in the collar...

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 15, 2014 at 10:58 AM Sweet write... Hope it's a happy memory though:)--olive_eloi