Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Tanka

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30.11.2024

Anne-Lise  Andresen 
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How my first poem was born 
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- Old Memories My First Poem -

                                              Under earthly sun
                                         Surely the madness of pain
                                                Abilities bloom
                                       grew as the stalk of bean plant
                                          I planted seeds of learning

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Andrea Dietrich December 15, 2024 at 12:38 PM Back with congrats

Christuraj Alex December 14, 2024 at 11:12 PM "grew as the stalk of bean plant" - grand work. Congratulations!

Duke Beaufort December 3, 2024 at 5:21 AM Anne-Lise, you always give me something to think about. Abilities and learning do make life much tolerable. I sometimes think we can even enjoy it. Smiles!

Jennifer Proxenos December 1, 2024 at 11:01 PM AND SO IT BEGAN - wonderful beginnings, bring about nourishment of the mind and soul - excellent start to a talented poetic future. Hugs and blessings Anne-Lise. Jennifer.

Jay Narain December 1, 2024 at 8:08 PM Nive first poem.

Andrea Dietrich December 1, 2024 at 7:49 PM Very nicely done. One of the best I have yet seen in this contest

Mystic Rose Rose December 1, 2024 at 11:38 AM and look how beautifully you grew Anne :)

Tom Cunningham November 30, 2024 at 1:27 PM 2011 wow, you're part of the furniture lol. I've only just got here. Tom Anne-Lise Andresen November 30, 2024 at 1:32 PM ... an old rocking chair :))) - hugs

John Read November 30, 2024 at 11:28 AM Dear Anne when did you write your first poem, I used to write little rhymes when I was at school, must say i haven't improved much lol. xx Anne-Lise Andresen November 30, 2024 at 11:34 AM - My first poem here on P-Soup was 11/26/2011 - My very first poem was many years before that time... but, is long gone ... I was in my teens and in love :) - hugs