Old Master

In honor of a wonderful, kind person who has been mentor to me and so many others and still gives so much even as time has taken so much from him...


With that rickety shuffle, 
he stays close to the wall
a concession, so small 
to time's passing

Hand gently probing,
like radar to guide
home safely, with pride
those sore bones 

Creaky old soul,
still wobbling along 
a spirit, so strong
that's prevailed

No aid is requested,
no quarter he's asked,
ever stoic he masks
any twinge or regret 
 
These tolls; the taxes,
the price to be paid
for a life that's made
so many prosper

Wisdom and courage,
his gifts; his bequests
given all for the best
of his flock

Honor, remember
don't ever forget
the duty, the debt,
the old master
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Fleming Avatar
February 1, 2015 at 4:32 PM
Just read the poem again...superb! A seven!! :) john.
Brown Avatar
February 1, 2015 at 9:21 PM
Thank you so much, John.
Fleming Avatar
February 1, 2015 at 4:30 PM
A wonderful poem and tribute! I would certainly like to know of whom you think so highly. Excellent pen, David! :) john.
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